Luminous Wizard's Entry: It Started With A Bang

[kakasaku_anon]

It started with a bang.

BANG

See, a bang!

BANG BANG BANG

… … … …

“Open the door sensei, I know you’re in there!”

… … … …

BANG BANG BANG

“I swear to Kami, if you don’t open this door right now I’ll…”

BANG BANG CRUNCH

…creak…

“Can you please not destroy my front door. I just had it newly installed last week, considering you oh so kindly decided to

Comments

[eldrfire]

Hee hee, what lovely eye candy!

I appreciated this phrase: Blushing from her neck up to her rosy roots

Nicely done!

[flametwirler]

Nice, love her holding the towel at the end (and whether Kakashi did that on purpose or she wasn't paying attention and just wouldn't let go is an amusing little tid bit.)

[flametwirler]

Whoops - didn't mean to reply to you directly eldr. That's what I get for reading/reviewing late at night, haha. Sorry for the confusion.

[eldrfire]

No worries!

[starlightdawn]

Oh, Sai, Naruto! - You always have to interupt at the worst damn times.

Loved this spin on dealing with Kakashi's lateness (or not, as the case may be).

~

[moldycookies]

hehehe. :) This one was cheery. And awesome.

[juniper_11]

I would need a smoke too! Oh, this was absolutely brilliant. I adore it.

[gothirishrose]

Ok I think I have my breath back now. What a nice romp! The part about Kakashi's rump disappearing into the bathroom is what set me off laughing. Nice tight (no pun intended) snapshot. And my eyes were transfixed too, watching that droplet of water...