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December Free Fiction: Advent Story: Thear Collection: Aisling: 1154 words

Dec 10, 2011 17:59

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advent story, character: epona, character: persephone, character: herne, character: logan, free fiction, character: bast, character: poseidon, character: aisling, character: fíona, character: trey

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Feedback ysabetwordsmith December 31 2011, 03:11:07 UTC

>>Logan was stood on the other side of the room<<

Delete "was" above.

>>The High Priestess of Epona was the oldest of the Highs at twenty-two,<<

There are serious challenges when leaders are that young. It's happened in the Pagan community, often because there weren't enough older members to go around.

>> and it wouldn't be long before she had to choose her successor<<

Why?