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Feedback ysabetwordsmith June 9 2014, 20:31:01 UTC
>> “It’s be your fault, <<

I think that should say "It would be" above.

>> but we’ll do our best to stop the from happening.” <<

That should say "stop that" or "stop the worst" perhaps.

>> we ever have a system <<

I think that should say "we even have" above.

>> and it isn’t unusual to even have murderers, although we haven’t had one of them for a while, thankfully.” <<

This is interesting because it could mean different things. One, they might genuinely have a murder rate that low, period. A few societies manage that, like Japan. Another is that he means serial killers, who are rare, and people who kill in cold blood; rather than the more common crimes of passion and opportunity.

Exciting installment!

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