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The World Walkers: Quiar: The Case of the Counterfeit Enchantments (part 9, 99th continuation)

May 30, 2014 17:12

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Part 9, 98th continuation

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Feedback ysabetwordsmith June 3 2014, 03:02:30 UTC

>> as a valid way of magic things happen.” <<

Something isn't right here. "... of making things happen" or "... of making magic" perhaps?

>> ‘By not going in to her mind to destroy it you made a choice. <<

Very well played.