The World Walkers: Taithmarin: Joel: Stepping onto Taithmarin

[kajones_writing]

Going home seemed like a mistake. Joel didn’t want to deal with the lecture he knew he was going to get. He was never going to be his brother, but that’s all his parents wanted him to be, because his brother was the good son, the son who didn’t keep getting in trouble, the son who wasn’t going to end up in prison if he wasn’t careful. There had

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[ysabetwordsmith]

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Ouch, that's even worse than the usual arrival speech about not being able to go home -- that if you did go, it would be worse than not going.