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The World Walkers: Quiar: The Case of the Counterfeit Enchantments (part 9, 78th continuation)

Mar 17, 2014 19:40

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Feedback ysabetwordsmith March 18 2014, 05:05:13 UTC

>>“What possible reason might Bertram’s wing had been damaged for?”<<

That should say "have" above.

Good emotional tension here.

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