Comments | kajones_writing: September Surprise Story Week: Tristan continued: The Brotherhood Collection: 1214 words

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September Surprise Story Week: Tristan continued: The Brotherhood Collection: 1214 words

Oct 22, 2011 22:22

See the beginning of this story here ( LJ link).
See the second part of this story here ( LJ link).

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character: lucas, character: tristan, character: kara, surprise story week, collection: the brotherhood, character: conrad, character: miriam

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Feedback ysabetwordsmith October 25 2011, 02:32:05 UTC

>>Maybe then I try again.”<<

That should say "I can try" above.

>>it was because one of my closest friends were psycho<<

I think that should say "went psycho" above; "were" doesn't match the tense.

>>I did it any way<<

That should say "anyway" above.