The World Walker: Quiar: Case Bonus Story: Aulus: Looking Back

[kajones_writing]

Written to show how Aulus became the mouse in the Moonjumper’s Bureau.

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[ysabetwordsmith]

I'm delighted to find out how Aulus got there!

>> He loved me and letting me go wasn’t easy for him. <<

This is such a charming detail. Too often characters are all good or all evil. But really, people are people. They love and hate and screw up each other's lives.

>> During the three day journey <<

That should say "three-day" above.

>> hoping that the sink wasn’t going to sink <<

That should say "ship" above.