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Feedback ysabetwordsmith February 20 2013, 23:35:12 UTC
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I really like this story; it has good tension and rapport from the beginning.

I suggest John to meet them; he's got a level head in a crisis.

A more sadistic approach would be Caleb, who's likely to have a panic attack from his own unfortunate experiences.

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