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kajikia

SGA Fic: All Our Yesterdays Will Haunt You

Aug 25, 2007 04:17

Title: All Our Yesterdays Will Haunt You (pdf)
Rating: R
Category: Gen
Length: ~5100 words
Spoilers: general season two
Summary:"So it's like our own personal Groundhog Day?" "But with a civil war and a Wraith culling, yes."

Written for the Atlantis Back2Basics Ficathon, for ismenetruth, who requested Team Sheppard being protective of each other and ( Read more... )

sga fic, gen, fic

Comments 54

thepouncer August 25 2007, 23:14:08 UTC

Go Teyla!

What a cool scenario - I love the idea of the gate looping them back, and their slowly growing awareness of what was happening.

kajikia August 26 2007, 18:59:32 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked the concept; I had a lot of fun with it.

cupidsbow August 26 2007, 04:57:46 UTC

Yay! I love time-loop stories, and this one is awesome. Thank you.

kajikia August 26 2007, 19:02:08 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

sholio August 26 2007, 08:47:44 UTC

This was really neat! I loved the Teyla POV, all the various things they tried as they looped through time and again, and of course the team-love. The group hug after Teyla's "death", and the way they decided to take that loop off to recover, was really neat; I figured someone was going to die at some point, but having it be the POV character (and the matter-of-fact way that it happened) gave it particular impact. Great story!

kajikia August 26 2007, 19:16:26 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm happy to hear Teyla's "death" still had an impact--that group hug was one of the first images I came up with when I started thinking about this story. *hearts team*

ticklie August 26 2007, 09:58:46 UTC

Oh, wow! Fantastic story - even though time-loops make my head hurt ;) I loved the teaminess of this fic, especially the hug after Teyla's death. Also, it was great reading the story from Teyla's POV. Did I mention how much I loved the team love here? ;)

kajikia August 26 2007, 19:26:08 UTC

Team-love FTW! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

ozsaur August 26 2007, 23:36:09 UTC

Wonderful! I loved how they kept trying one plan after another and finally getting it right. And wow, I wasn't expecting Teyla to actually die. Loved the group hug, and the team-iness of the whole story.

kajikia August 27 2007, 03:25:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad the team-love came across for you; that's pretty much my favorite aspect of the show.