Finding the Way

Apr 02, 2017 19:51

"Come back my child ( Read more... )

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eternal_ot April 3 2017, 08:21:32 UTC
I like the fact that you have kept it open to interpretation. The dialogues really reach out to create a scene in your mind. Nice take!

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kajel April 3 2017, 14:18:47 UTC
Thanks!

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adoptedwriter April 3 2017, 14:42:03 UTC

Very powerful indeed!

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kehlen April 3 2017, 15:26:27 UTC
This is awesome. Both of these perspectives are so familiar it hurts.

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rswndrlst April 3 2017, 15:41:07 UTC

What a universal feeling the desire to break free from family tradition but there could be reason for the grandmother to be afraid, my obession with magical realism makes me wonder if there is a curse or a some evil that the family is trying to protect her from. In the end I think the decision to choose her own path was too important to her to heed the warnings (I can relate)

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karmasoup April 4 2017, 01:17:18 UTC
Brilliant! Would that all could find such self assured courage, tenacity, and fortitude. Well played! :)

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