BREAKING DAWN WRITE-A-THON

Aug 02, 2008 19:53

MEND THE FAILBOAT.

After reading Breaking Dawn, what do you wish had happened? What do you think should have happened? Hey, what could have happened, if not for various SMeyer-related reasons?

Here's your chance to rewrite the book how you want to, if only in a few little pieces.

spoilers under cut )

meta post, breaking dawn write-a-thon, uc glee

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my body doesn't feel the same- kate/garrett-pg nuits_froides August 5 2008, 05:26:57 UTC
He's hypnotized by the way her face looks so determined in the sunlight.

Even when she hurts, she looks so damn beautiful doing it.

If only she looked that determined when night falls.

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"Garrett, you don't want someone like me," she warns.

She moves him aside, rolling her eyes.

Warn me with electricity, if you please.

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She finds him a pest, another man to deal with.

She looks in her mind, another excuse to break a heart.

But she can't find one.

She finds it difficult to move away from him.

He's the magnet attracting all solid and electrical appliances.

She doesn't want to give up, but something is telling her to do it.

She always finds a way.

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She falls to the ground, her face devoid of any authentic real tears.

She begs in her head(never aloud) for someone, anyone to bring her back.

Arms embrace her and she knows that it's neither of her sisters.

I'm sorry.

She looks up to his face (her stubbornness cast aside) and she grabs his hand.

Maybe he doesn't understand, but one day he will.

For whatever you need, I ( ... )

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Re: my body doesn't feel the same- kate/garrett-pg kaiwynn August 5 2008, 16:49:02 UTC
kate/garrett is such an awesome ship, i love them. that last scene with the shock-free kiss? amazing.

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Re: my body doesn't feel the same- kate/garrett-pg loveapart August 5 2008, 21:28:28 UTC
God, I love these two so much. Very, very good. :)

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Re: my body doesn't feel the same- kate/garrett-pg windblownglass August 10 2008, 10:29:14 UTC
♥♥ I love this ship oh-so-much, and this piece is just amazing. Great job.

But the shock never comes.

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