Fic: Eloisa to Abelard

[kaitmaree77]

Title: Eloisa to Abelard
Author: kaitmaree77 
Ratings: M, to be safe.
Warnings: angst; mention of sex;
Word-count: 1, 912
Summary: Arthur replays every moment back in his head.
Note: Heavily based on the procedures of Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless mind, the movie, and the poem Eloisa to Abelard by Alexander Pope. I claim no creative license to any of these

Comments

[zetaori]

Very fascinating. The potential is endless, but I like how you've restricted yourself to a few scenes that tell a whole story. The end was perfect, and now I can't stop hoping that their second try will be better.
Oh, I think I'm actually in love with this fic. ♥

[kaitmaree77]

Thank you so much for your lovely words! <3

[peachchild336]

This is really sweet and beautiful. I think my favorite part was the italicized part describing their fights and how Arthur left and came back but Eames left and didn't.

I've never thought about it, but the concepts in Inception and those in Eternal Sunshine sort of blend together, don't they? You did it beautifully.

I wouldn't mind seeing a sequel to this.

[kaitmaree77]

Thank you so so much.

<3

And I am contemplating a sequel, just don't want to do it for the sake of continuing the story, so I'll seek some ideas!

[lothlorienbaby]

I love love love how you folded the two films together. Really great work!

[kaitmaree77]

Thank you so much. <3 Sorry for the delayed reply!