If you cry, I cry. If you jump off a bridge, I jump in a paddleboat and save your stupid ass.

[kaitism]

Title: If you cry, I cry. If you jump off a bridge, I jump in a paddleboat and save your stupid ass.

Author: **kaitism

Genre: semi-angsty? drabble, AU

Paring: broken!Onkey, Jongkey

Rating: ummm…PG-13? Someone attempts suicide…

Disclaimer: while the Jonghyun and Key in this fic are fictional and creations of my mind, the actual

Comments

[shineeblue]

jongkey really is the perfect combination... <3 such a great couple, more than dynamic duo... ^^

i love how you depicted their relationship... a bond so strong that no one can break it and how the other gets affected by his other half's emotions... ^^ true friendship and true love... <3

funny that last night i was thinking about an anime fic i've read way back in high school with a somewhat similar story... 'you jump and i jump' kind of story... and they ended up jumping in a river, too... :p

anyways, this is really amusing and nice flow... ^^ and they became good friends with the other three in the end... yey, shinee~! ^^ onew should really just be paired up with chicken... :p

[kaitism]

i agree, jongkey is so perfect <3 they're not even perfect...what's a word for beyond perfect??? And about the onkey....i think maybe onew's lust for chicken was what fueled this breakup xD

i'm glad you liked my fic~ thank you for reading(:

[kaitism]

oh, i forgot to mention....I AM IN LOVE W/ YOUR PIC. IT'S BEAUTIFUL. I LOVE IT. ♥

[shineeblue]

i am in love with that jongkey pic, too... haha~! ^^

LOL at chicken being the cause of break-up... suddenly remembered ho onew chose chicken over yoogeun... -.- so chicken being first in his heart more than key is also very much believable... anyways, key is really for jonghyun... ^^

[ponyatf]

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!

Awe, the amount of jongkeyish awesomeness... and I lold so hard over the 2min brothers with their polishing fists, kekekeke
But most of all the overall-mood, the light way u told an angsty story was much joy to read!

And there is so many things I want to quote or to write down into the big book of Jongkey-expressions...
"After all, they are just too perfect a combination to be a short-time thing."

~Thank you so much for sharing!

<33333333333

[kaitism]

Ohey, hearts for me! :D and you liked the mean 2Min? i'll keep that in mind ;) And there's a big book of Jongkey-expressions? I gotta see this....

Thanks for reading/commenting!! ♥

[ponyatf]

Kekekekeke, yes yes I liked them! Well, I can't really imagine them being bad ass beater, so it gave me a good lol and I wanted to pinch the cheeks of the idea's cuteness, kekeke

Hehehehe, yeah there is a book like that in my mind... it might be hard to show others though, unless... I AM GOING INTO THE PRINTING BUSINESS *brings an idea to this world*

[kaitism]

hey, who says 2min can't be badass? they could totally be-----yeahhh no you're right xD good luck in the printing business ~!!! ;)

[deasyellow]

the last sentence? perfect. and can i beat onew up? i'm just going to do it damn it.

i love the lines in between sections because i'm sappy like that okay, this is so great ♥

[kaitism]

thank you~!! i don't think beating onew up is such a good idea...we don't want him to get killed do we? >_>

[mellovesshinee]

Beautiful :') i love this!! i just dont like the onkey -.- even if its broken i still have difficulty dealing with it xD BUT BEAUTIFUL! BRAVO! a nice one shot! good job :') lovely!

[kaitism]

GAHHH thank youuu~!! and i am truly VERY SORRY about the onkey! i don't like it either (but i have to admit, they can be rather adorkable sometimes)

Thank you for reading and commenting!! ♥

[lullabyrui]

omo.

I seriously almost died as well.
*takes deep breath*
That was amazing, I loved it.
JONGKEY FOREVER <3

It was great, perfect and other added ectras. Lol.
^^ Great Job with taking my breath away.

[kaitism]

*almost revives with Jongkey posters* (actually, i wish there were such a thing as jongkey posters...but there aren't ;____;)

Thank you for reading!! I'm sorry I almost killed you....>_>