(for soopremo) little boy

[parkourdeer]

❊ for: soopremo
❊ title: little boy
❊ pairings: kai/d.o
❊ rating: pg
❊ warnings: slight!age gap (6 y/o kyungsoo, 11 y/o jongin)
❊ word count: 4,422
❊ summary: Jongin thought the Little Prince reappeared in the form of a six-year-old boy.
❊ a/n: Hello. ^^ You'll find that the fic is a bit lacking in proper ending, but I still think what I have so far for

Comments

[notstudying123]

I love this story. the flow is perfect. I hope to read the ending one day
Really, really good writing

[zhgyi]

Omg I found it lacking in so many ways but thank you so much for giving this a chance. ;u; I hope so too!!

SPOT SPOT SPOT

[soopremo]

!! SPOT! I'LL GET BACK TO THIS AFTER *SLAMS FIST AGAINST THE TABLE* SCHOOLWORK ;UUU;

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[soopremo]

Where do I even start with this? I don't know how to comment and give justice to this fic at the same time so please bear with me ;u;

OKAY first off, I want to thank you for choosing this prompt (as it was actually one of my faves)!! I want you to know that I'm really grateful and that I really appreciate how you wrote this even if the prompt gave you a run for your money lol

I absolutely love how you incorporated excerpts and themes from Antoine de Saint-Exupéry’s 'The Little Prince' in this story!!! Actually, I SQUEALED after reading the first line and realizing where it's from! 'The Little Prince' is one of my favorite stories ;_; and I JUST-- I don't think I can thank you enough.

Kyungsoo didn’t look at all persuaded and chose not to remind him that he was the only hyung he liked, and inched closer to the fence. He leaned forward, like he was ready to share a secret with Jongin. He gestured for him to dip down, so Jongin did, anticipating what it was he had to say.

“I’m looking for Tree B-612.”I SQUEALED FOR THE SECOND TIME

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[zhgyi]

DID YOU KNOW THAT I WAITED TWO DAYS FOR YOU TO COME BACK AND COMMENT. TWO DAYS - lololol xD I laughed when I saw your message because schoolwork. So dramatic.

I then proceeded to cry because you were able to take out themes in the story I didn't even know I wanted to portray! And in a way that's what I love about this - there's a chance for different interpretation, in a way.

I was juggling between all of your prompts. You gave me so many! But this picture really stuck to me and I just thought we all need another kid!kaisoo in our lives, you know? lol I'm really glad you're satisfied with my choice >//< I was really glad for the option

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[soopremo]

I AM SO SORRY THAT I MADE YOU WAIT THAT LONG!!! I am actually still drowning in schoolwork and idk when I'll be able to come back to shore.

I hope I didn't interpret them wrong, though? Cause that can be an issue OTL

AGAIN, I AM SO SORRY. I was actually trying to give you stuff to choose from cause I was afraid that none of them might sound like something worth writing LOL And yes, I agree U_U we don't get that much kid!kaisoo these days. This is also the reason why I was so glad that you chose this prompt.

- H U G S Y O U B A C K - That book ripped me. I hope I can find time to read it in its original language soon ;u;

You're vry v welcomeeee, my precious writer! G A S P S THIS MAKES ME EVEN MORE EXCITED I CAN'T UGHH;; Yes, please. Let's talk soon. ;u;

[richrychu]

Poor jongin baby :( 11yo kids shouldn't have such problems :/ ksoo is like kid living in his own world, he reminds me of myself XD this story is so good! I would like to read more about kaisoo interactions c: I will be waiting for the ending

[zhgyi]

LOL I'm glad you could relate to Kyungsoo on a personal level xD I hope you get to read more of it, too. One day soon, I hope! There's more to come. :3

[lowislane]

Even though the fic is incomplete, I loved it! I looove The Little Prince.
and oh, 6 YR OLD KYUNGSOO SEEMS LIEK THE CUTEST THING EVER <3

[zhgyi]

Thank you so muuuuch! ;u; For reading, and I'm glad you liked what you read. And thAT YOU LOVE THE 'LITTLE PRINCE'. LOL 6yo Kyungsoo is my favourite. c;

[kaiolly]

this is so damn good!! and im srsly waiting for the real ending!!!