I really liked the flipping back and forth from pst to present. The past moments were my favorite and going through them when they came up in the present worked really well. I thought this was great.
LISTEN HERE, YOUNG FELLA. WHO ALLOWED YOU TO PLAY MY HEART LIKE THIS?? ARE YOU AWARE OF WHAT YOU STARTED? PLEASE BEAR WITH ME FOR A BIT, UNTIL I CAN PULL MYSELF BACK TOGETHER
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"You are in every book and every character I have ever written"
This sums up all the love us writers put on every work. This is amazing, and in my opinion, the fact that kaisoo starred in this story was just a bonus. The story, regardless of who the characters were, is already alive. You've done really well! In contrast to the theme of this story, it wasn't the characters that gets immortalized, but it should be you, the author, who gets the distinction. Will never forget how beautiful this was.
brb wiping my tears and also crying holy shit. i knew this was gonna happen but I still can't help but feel like shit and curious on how jongin had passed first. like did they die of old age or smthng. i just can't ugh. and the line,
“Your worries are my worries,” Jongin started.
“Your passions are my passions,” Kyungsoo finished.
wreck me and my soul how do i cope with the next few days.
No one is perfect, but to me you are the closest thing to perfection. And I don't think I could ever thank you enough for giving me your love.
Our last adventure: KJ 2086.08.25 & DK 2086.10.02
i wanna cry. I don't wanna have to live the reality where DKS and KJI is gonna die and-- i just can't. I'll shed real fuckin' tears. No. I don't accept this reality. fml.
HOLY SHIT. SENPAI U WROTE THIS. AND UR MY BETA FOR GOLDEN EXO- OMFG. HOW CAN I FEEL MORE BLESSED. HOLYYYYY BROCOLLIS. GAH. TAHNK U FOR WRITING SUCH A WONDERFUL PIECE BUT ALSO, goodness me thank god he died from old age and nothing else. guh. i can't bare the pain of having kji die from cancer or smthng. im good. no more flashbacks to anterograde tomorrow pls.
this is so beautiful... this deserve more love from readers... omg.. i love how luhan was reading kaisoo's love story... you are a wonderful writer... DONT DOUBT YOUR TALENT... im pretty sure that every writer who read this would feel enlightened and realize that the stories they wrote would really live on forever and that in one way or another their fics affects others people lives...it could be as simple as making people smile or cry; or it could also inspire people to try and write and share their imagination to the world.... as a writer myself, i also have those 'they didnt like my fic/ my fic wasnt good enough' moments... this fic made me appreciate and love my fics a little bit more... i know i have a lot of flaws in my fics but this fic made me realize that no matter how many or few subscribers/likes i get on my fics there's always gonna be that one 'Luhan' that will be thankful for what i had written...
THANK YOU... YOU DIDNT JUST GAVE ME KAISOO FEELS YOU ALSO MADE ME LOVE MY CRAFT AND TALENT MORE...
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This sums up all the love us writers put on every work. This is amazing, and in my opinion, the fact that kaisoo starred in this story was just a bonus. The story, regardless of who the characters were, is already alive. You've done really well! In contrast to the theme of this story, it wasn't the characters that gets immortalized, but it should be you, the author, who gets the distinction. Will never forget how beautiful this was.
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“Your worries are my worries,” Jongin started.
“Your passions are my passions,” Kyungsoo finished.
wreck me and my soul how do i cope with the next few days.
No one is perfect, but to me you are the closest thing to perfection. And I don't think I could ever thank you enough for giving me your love.
Our last adventure: KJ 2086.08.25 & DK 2086.10.02
i wanna cry. I don't wanna have to live the reality where DKS and KJI is gonna die and-- i just can't. I'll shed real fuckin' tears. No. I don't accept this reality. fml.
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you are a wonderful writer... DONT DOUBT YOUR TALENT... im pretty sure that every writer who read this would feel enlightened and realize that the stories they wrote would really live on forever and that in one way or another their fics affects others people lives...it could be as simple as making people smile or cry; or it could also inspire people to try and write and share their imagination to the world....
as a writer myself, i also have those 'they didnt like my fic/ my fic wasnt good enough' moments... this fic made me appreciate and love my fics a little bit more... i know i have a lot of flaws in my fics but this fic made me realize that no matter how many or few subscribers/likes i get on my fics there's always gonna be that one 'Luhan' that will be thankful for what i had written...
THANK YOU... YOU DIDNT JUST GAVE ME KAISOO FEELS YOU ALSO MADE ME LOVE MY CRAFT AND TALENT MORE...
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