[A08] WARM ME BETTER

Jul 28, 2016 12:44





Prompt Code: A08
Title: Warm Me Better
Rating: PG-13
Side pairings: mentioned Sehun/Irene
Word Count: 6.2k
Summary: Kyungsoo and Jongin learn to appreciate the kind of warmth only a family can provide.
Warnings: swearing, mpreg, mentions of artificial insemination, descriptions of past miscarriages, awkward pov shifts
AN: I kinda feel ( Read more... )

category: a, round 1: 2016

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anonymous July 28 2016, 05:07:14 UTC
i teared up when kangwoo decided to leave the house. god, i can see how jongin would panic because he felt guilty from the words he had said to kangwoo and I also can see Kyungsoo being so mature and trying his best to find his baby boy. When they found him, god. the relief the way Kyungsoo grasped onto Kangwoo. God I just love this scene.

“My baby,” he says as he engulfs the boy in his arms, his heart thundering in his chest. The tears finally leak out of his eyes, and he lets them, exhausted. “My baby,” he says again, relishing in it.

i felt the angst for ksoo because he couldn't bare kids and god. this fic is cute, fluffy with a tinge of angst that makes it more realistic. Thank you for writing this!

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anonymous July 28 2016, 08:24:30 UTC
I loved this. I mean, this is a slice of life. A matter that can happen to anyone. The angst here is just perfect. I wouldn't mind the pain as long as they are happy in the end. I love Kyungsoo's characterization. :') i love every bit of this fic. I loved how it ended!!!

I have no words for this. This is beautifukly written. Thank you so much ❤

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shadowhunterrx July 28 2016, 09:38:21 UTC
Oh man, I felt so bad for Kyungsoo and how he felt like he wasnt gokd enough for Jongin.
i loved the way you wrote their relationshi, and the way they handle everything.
Thanks for writing this!

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anonymous July 28 2016, 12:44:38 UTC
This overwhelms me with so many feels, and warmth me up from the inside, the plot development is amazing and obviously a lot of thoughts and efforts have been put into it, I think I can kind of understand kyungsoo because if someone else has jongin's baby it will forever be a reminder that he can't give birth, at last they both understood that its not the blood ties but the love and the interactions that define a family! Great moral

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eyesonly0702 July 28 2016, 15:11:22 UTC
I live for stories like this 😁
Great job author-nim

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