I'm so? speechless? I haven't seen the movie yet but you were right. This fic can stand on its own.
I hate it when the i love yous happen too early but it's different here. It was like they knew each other since forever, like no one else knows them better than each other. The feelings just came so naturally. When they said i love you, I felt it in my heart. You built the world so perfectly to make this possible.
Thank you for writing this masterpiece. More power to you!
I've never watched the movie. Well, I might watch it one of these days!! Haha. This is a refreshing plot. Made me think that what if someone writes about me? This is so cool. I loved how that voice became Kyungsoo's companion for a while.
I love the confrontation scene. And how it ended was just perfect. Everything about this fic is just wonderful. :') It was beautifully written.
Jongin shakes his head contemplatively. "But that's not it. It's just… like this, in front of me, you're just much more… complete than I ever could have imagined you to be. I mean, I know I'm supposed to have created you and all, but the more I look back on it, the more it feels like you've been here all along, and you just started whispering into my ear at some point. The way I wrote you… I mean, I did my best, but looking at you now I really only wrote the shadow of you, and only now I'm starting to see what the sun has been shining on."
Sweetest line!!! *SOBS* GAAHHH. This is beautiful! :') Thank u for this one! ❤
I've undoubtly fallen in love with your writing. This was the most beautiful thing I've read in a while. Man, this- words cannot describe how amazing you've made this. I remember the movie- It's been years since I've seen the movie- being more funny than anything. I absolutely love writers who are in depth with their characters so much it's sorta strange -hence, Jongins character. And Kyungsoo, if I'm honest was like a reflection of myself.
"But there was an idea slowly forming, an idea of this one character who did not need much at all and gave great love and care to those around him. But beneath the man with the small wishes there was this one need, non-specified but positively burning, a general need for more.That contradiction was very appealing to me, but even more so was the idea that this character was of a pure honesty. Undeniably himself, hard-working, sincere, but still flawed in the most precise of ways. That's what drew me in really, what I saw as the core of this character's' personality. So I just started writing
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the whole idea of this story is really great!
i love it!!
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I hate it when the i love yous happen too early but it's different here. It was like they knew each other since forever, like no one else knows them better than each other. The feelings just came so naturally. When they said i love you, I felt it in my heart. You built the world so perfectly to make this possible.
Thank you for writing this masterpiece. More power to you!
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I love the confrontation scene. And how it ended was just perfect. Everything about this fic is just wonderful. :') It was beautifully written.
Jongin shakes his head contemplatively. "But that's not it. It's just… like this, in front of me, you're just much more… complete than I ever could have imagined you to be. I mean, I know I'm supposed to have created you and all, but the more I look back on it, the more it feels like you've been here all along, and you just started whispering into my ear at some point. The way I wrote you… I mean, I did my best, but looking at you now I really only wrote the shadow of you, and only now I'm starting to see what the sun has been shining on."
Sweetest line!!! *SOBS* GAAHHH. This is beautiful! :') Thank u for this one! ❤
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"But there was an idea slowly forming, an idea of this one character who did not need much at all and gave great love and care to those around him. But beneath the man with the small wishes there was this one need, non-specified but positively burning, a general need for more.That contradiction was very appealing to me, but even more so was the idea that this character was of a pure honesty. Undeniably himself, hard-working, sincere, but still flawed in the most precise of ways. That's what drew me in really, what I saw as the core of this character's' personality. So I just started writing ( ... )
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This is great!! Kyungsoo as a character who is just as real as the author i want to scream!!
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