[I30] (IT'S ALL IN THE) DOENJANG STEW

Jul 06, 2016 09:36





Prompt Code: I30
Title: (it’s all in the) doenjang stew
Rating: PG-13
Side Pairings (if any): friends!sudo
Warnings: minor gore, implied minor character death
Word Count: 1.6k
Summary: Kyungsoo’s guide on how to cook doenjang stew. Except Kyungsoo doesn’t really have a taste for human food anymore.
AN: To the prompter, I hope you’ll see ( Read more... )

category: i, round 1: 2016

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afterwejump August 14 2016, 01:15:31 UTC
Their relationship is pretty vague in the fic, but Jongin and Kyungsoo care for each other deeply and are intimate lol. Thank you so much for reading :') !!

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convexxed July 6 2016, 02:35:47 UTC
OH MY GODDDD
I don't know what the prompt was but this was absolutely amazing. It's intriguing and the descriptions had me squealing in delight. You, my friend, have such a way with words and poetry I have to applaud.

His lips are smeared with sky; his hands are stained with it.

THIS. I can't even express how beautiful this was. These are words that will linger in my head and one day I'll think "I feel like reading the fic where Kyungsoo's lips were smeared with sky and his hands were stained with it" and come back to this. Thank you so much for writing this piece, dearest author <3333

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afterwejump August 14 2016, 01:17:57 UTC
In an earlier draft, the wording was more like "Kyungsoo's palms were blue," but then I was like.. nah, they're just stained with sky lol. Anyway, thank you so much for your lovely comment T_____T <3 !!

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convexxed August 16 2016, 02:18:46 UTC
oh my, I'm actually glad you went for the latter because it was just so perfect and it's engraved in my memory now lol thank you for writing such a wonderful and beautiful piece aaaah

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soft_wallnuts July 6 2016, 03:47:56 UTC

This was. Intense. I think I was thoroughly confused for at least half of the time I was reading this but I was so into the story despite that, I just couldn't stop reading. ^^ What a great job you did with this fic! Thank you for sharing this! ♡

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afterwejump August 14 2016, 01:19:31 UTC
Thank you so much for reading my fic, even though it may have been confusing! I wrote an explanation post if you're curious about meaning/interpretation http://afterwejump.livejournal.com/9739.html

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friedchickai July 6 2016, 03:57:25 UTC
unique but interesting!! your descriptions were so beautiful and on point. thanks for writing! ^^

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afterwejump August 14 2016, 01:20:12 UTC
Thank you so, so much for reading :) !!

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soupydaisy July 6 2016, 04:21:24 UTC
Ooooh that was beautiful I love it!!
Your words are so consice and simple and so is the story but at the same time its not? Idk how to describe it but its so different and so good <3

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afterwejump August 14 2016, 01:22:38 UTC
Haha yeah my writing style is pretty concise ^^;;;; I'm no good at writing long fics lol. And thank you so much for your kind words <3 !!

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