falling into you
title: falling into you
ship/s: baekhyun/kai
rating: nc-17 (smut, some swearing)
word count: ~4,200
summary: “If you can’t dance, I’ll still love you...but I’m afraid you won’t be able to love yourself.”
warning/s: light angst, heavy fluff, pwp
( For a second it feels like kissing a promise... )
ship/s: baekhyun/kai
rating: nc-17 (smut, some swearing)
word count: ~4,200
summary: “If you can’t dance, I’ll still love you...but I’m afraid you won’t be able to love yourself.”
warning/s: light angst, heavy fluff, pwp
( For a second it feels like kissing a promise... )
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Needless to say that this was absolutely spectacular, as is all your writing.
It's so refreshing to see a whole 4k words of quality smut /bows down
I love how you incorporated the fluff within the smut as well rather than segregating them (like how it's usually done, not that it's a bad thing but it's very refreshing.)
I also love how you showcased Baekhyun's true caring nature and just made this fic so natural and real with the awkwardness, imperfections, hesitation and pain i am so in love.
"Then his eyes close, and he turns his head to lightly mouth at Jongin’s wrist, lips catching the bracelet he always wears. For a second it feels like kissing a promise, and he’s reminded why Jongin works as hard as he does; why they both do."
u already know but with this I just.. dropped, and it wasn't only because of the wrist kissing but Baekhyun's love and care and the amplitude of their connection was conveyed so beautifully (and ugh literary techniques)
"when he pulls down he has to burst out laughing ( ... )
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Damn, once I master that art, I'll be sure to let you know how it's done~~
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I think it's really well written, and also I love how they interact and their relationship! I was going to read something else you wrote, but this is your first exo fic, from what I see! So I look forward your future works♥
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thank you for this comment omg it made my day ; w ; and don't worry, exo has completely consumed my life and i've got twenty some odd ideas scribbled (not even exaggerating-i might be underestingmating, actually-and that's not including the two fic exchanges i'm signed up for orz) so it'll never be a dull moment around here, haha. i look forward to you reading them! <3
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so fluffy and tender and sweet yet hilarious and hot and //real//
baekai is so under-appreciated but when i see fics like this i know there's still life in my ship lmao a girl can dream
loved the smut, loved the banter, loved basically everything orz
amazing work love keep writing!!! xx
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