[series] Dreamcatcher: chapter sixteen

[kailice]

Title: Dreamcatcher 16/??
Pairings: Ohmiya, Jun/Aiba
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own the plot, Arashi owns my heart, and Johnny owns Arashi and my wallet.
Word Count: 3,005
Summary: AU. Dreamcatchers force their way into dreams and steal them, leaving no trace within the dreamer’s memory. Ohno is one who makes people forget. Nino is the one who isn

Comments

[hikasai]

8D

[kailice]

:D :D :D

[hikasai]

This chapter was intense~
Everything's making sense now though. It's slowly falling into place :D
I hope they find the answer and crush Johnny! XDDD
And, i love love love your writing ♥ It's so vivid and beautiful and so much love :D

[kailice]

Yup! All of the pieces are coming together. It won't be long before everything is connected. And once that happens, we'll see what they do about it! ;D
Aw, thank you <3 that's so sweet of you to say and it makes me happy to hear ♥

[hwlinyitw]

Oh, I totally didn't saw that coming (that she was Ohno's mother). And for some reason this chapter made me wonder just how old exactly Johnny is here, because if he was de founder of the border and how long has everything been up to. And her mother I can't even imagine how she must feel like having his son stolen to another wold and became what he is now. And I like how when they were introduced to each other it wasn't over dramatic, because he really doesn't remember her. I'm babbling, sorry but this is sorry but I really love this and somehow I was trying to convey that, which apparently I'm incapable of doing....

BTW, I loved this dream too, I love the dreams you write about they are really unique ^^

I can't wait to see what happens next xDD

[kailice]

As far as the ages for everyone goes, it's kinda-sorta set so that Ohno's 24, Sho's 23, etc. As for Johnny, he's technically as old as he is in rl (circa 2004/5). But as for how old the Border is and how long he's been up to everything... that'll be explained later on. And yes, poor Ohno Mama. The way I wrote her is pretty ooc from what I think his mother is actually like, but for the introduction I wanted her to be... idk, sort of distant? Like even though she's missed him, she understands that he doesn't remember so she just wants to try slowly becoming his mother again. And with Ohno, he knows that he should be close to her, but he isn't, so he's a little unsure about what to do. No worries about babbling, because as you can see, I do it a lot myself XD

Thank you! <3

[kailice]

Isn't it? Ohno being close to Ohno!Mama is so natural, I feel like I've committed a fandom sin XD but now that he knows, maybe he'll start getting to know her again, or maybe he'll remember? Time will tell ;D
I like writing the thoughts/visual stuff and dialogue tends to frustrate me XD so I'm glad you think so! Thank you <3

[shadow_kick]

Your writing is as dreamy as the subject of your story. ♥

[kailice]

Your comment is as sweet as you are ♥

[isaofdoom]

I love love love the fantasy in this and now it's tying to reality just so good unf. ;A; ;A; ;A;♥

[kailice]

And I love love love you! ;D Thank you bb ♥♥♥