[one-shot] Unsaid

[kailice]

Title: Unsaid
Pairings: Ohno/Machida, Ohmiya
Rating: R
Disclaimer: I own nothing.
Word Count: 5526
Summary: Sometimes silence can say much more than words (but that doesn’t mean it’s speaking the truth).
Prompt by Rikke: A dressing room, Ohno/Machida, and Jealous!Nino and a whole lot of kissing.
Notes: Well... part of it fits the prompt, at least

Comments

[pebblegosling]

this...was lovely (T___T poor Machida though)
you wrote it really well, and I loved the structure, different, but very easy to follow.
Thank you. Can't wait for the next Dreamcatcher update!!

[pebblegosling]

ah! first!

[kailice]

Yup, yay first!
I'm glad you found it easy to follow, that was the one thing I was most worried about.
Thank you!!

[shadow_kick]

This is so pretty. *_________*

I like how you structured the paragraphs. It's really well-written and the feelings come through nicely. & I like how it's so human.

Thanks for sharing! <3

[kailice]

Thank you! <3 It makes me happy to hear it came across as "human".

[nino_arashi]

this is so.... amazing, beautiful, lovely and more more more!!!
I love how you wrote this is a 2nd person's view..
T_T for Machida but my evil side is going Yay for Ohmiya! XD
Thanks for writing this amazing fic^^ Can't wait for Dreamcatcher!!

[kailice]

Thank you! <3
It was my first time writing anything in 2nd person, but it was a lot of fun, so I'm glad it came out well.
At first it was going to end as Ohno/Machida and one-sided Ohmiya, but. My bias. It wouldn't let me XD

[aiyasa]

This was beautiful. Heartbreaking yet absolutely beautiful.

I really like your writing style and the way the different POVs were so clearly portrayed. The negative numbers were very insightful too.

I love this. Thank you for sharing it!

[kailice]

I'm glad the POVs were clear. It took me the longest time figuring out a way to organize it, and the negative numbers felt perfect. My hope was to make them a part of the story and not just something that divides it, so I'm happy to hear that ^^

Thank you for reading!! :D

[rikke_leonhart]

..this pile of awesome for me?

I love you. And I loved this. And I'm breathless and shocked and heartbroken, I'm speechless and awed and...just.

I love you.

Thank you <3

[kailice]

I stuffed it full of as much awesomeness as I could, just for you!

I love you too, dear <3 You really do deserve it, you know. And I'm so glad you like it!

You're welcome, and thank you for being amazing in so many ways <333

[rikke_leonhart]

This fic just makes me so happy, and I feel kind of horrible for only writing you 800 and then some words :/
I'll make it up to you, I promise!!

No, thank you for being awesome and my friend <3

[kailice]

Aw, don't feel bad over that! I really do love what you gave me. The very first part of this is what I planned on giving you, but I was hit with an idea I had to run with it.
but if you want to make it up to me, feel free to! *greedy for fic* XD

It's a miracle that the fandom can handle your awesomeness and my awesomeness combined D:

<333