Kamen Rider W - The First And Last Nightingale

[umbrellaofdoom]

Title: The First and Last Nightingale
Fandom: Kamen Rider W
Pairing: Shoutarou/Phillip
Rating: NC17
Summary: Follows "If This Is Our Last Night". Hot with a dash of sadness here and there.
Notes: Part two of (currently) three in my plot bunny that grew. Enjoy!

As always, comments = ♥

Comments

[subetehoshi]

YAYYYY I'M HERE! *sits and reads*

....oh god.

OH GOD.

Yup. That was DEFINITELY worth the LONG WAIT AND STUPID DAY I HAD. Because this. THIS. IS FUCKING WONDERFUL. With Phillip in CONTROL, bottoming from the top, being the STRONG one...gah.

And that comparison you made with Phillip and Fang? HOLY CHRIST. See, THAT RIGHT THERE is why I can't read this at work. I SQUEALED. LOUDLY. I absolutely LOVE how you can pull these things out and compare them, seemingly so effortlessly. Gah.

I CAN'T GET ENOUGH.

And the ending, although super-sad, is wonderful as well. BECAUSE, like I said before, I KNOW THERE'S A HAPPY ENDING. AND REUNION SMEX.
AND EVERYONE WILL BE HAPPY.
Like me right now. (^_^)

So now I'll be EAGERLY awaiting the final fic in this 3 part piece of PURE AWESOMENESS. :DDD

[umbrellaofdoom]

DID YOU CRY SHOUTAROU MANLY TEARS? 8DDD

I should be a bitch and write a Shoutarou Delusions of "What if Phillip Never Came Back?" but that would just be dead depressing.

I'm glad you enjoyed! No lie, I was lying about in bed, super comfy, and I heard the bells for noon and was like "...THERE WILL BE FIC COMMENTS!" and it was totally the reason I left my comfy bed.

I seriously need to write something gen before posting another nc17 fic. Three NC17s in a row just makes me look like a horny, desperate writer.

[subetehoshi]

XD;;
Oh man that would be ONE SAD FIC OF SADNESS if you wrote that...

See NOW I can read this on my cell at work. I think I can control myself, this time. Maybe.

Hey now, One can NEVER have too many NC17 fics. *laughs*
But I do like gen as well, so you won't hear me complain. :P

[umbrellaofdoom]

*snickers* So I went back and changed a line. Thought you might like it.

“You know only bad things come in threes.” Phillip nuzzles his nose against Shoutarou's neck, having quickly found it was a particularly sensitive spot on the detective, making Shoutarou choke at Phillip's attempt at a dirty joke. “We really aught to make it an even four, just to be safe. Plus, Terui gave us an hour, we might as well use it.”

[tayles]

“We really aught to make it an even four.
'Ought', I believe. Also, isn't four unlucky in Japan? *ducks thrown objects* XD;;

That was... sweet. And hot, obviously, but sweet and sad too. I lovelovelove your Terui at the beginning (ILU TERUI), and how chilled he is. I suspect a lot of people would write him as a total prude, and I love that you didn't. I like the fast and hard and wanting a reminder even if it's pain of the actual sex (reminds me of a FMA fic I read once where Ed genuinely couldn't sit down throughout a train journey because he wanted a damn reminder XDDDDD), and my heart breaks for Philip when he finally cries.

AT LEAST I KNOW IT DOESN'T END LIKE THIS OR I'D BE REALLY SAD D:

[umbrellaofdoom]

Double checked with the dictionary, aught and ought are the same, one's Brit English and the other is US English. And Canadian English uses both. XD;;; And yeah, it is, but I'll pretend that Phillip doesn't know that because he never bothered to research it. XD so I found a lolarious way of fixing it.

“You know only bad things come in threes.” Phillip nuzzles his nose against Shoutarou's neck, having quickly found it was a particularly sensitive spot on the detective, making Shoutarou choke at Phillip's attempt at a dirty joke. “We really aught to make it an even four, just to be safe. Plus, Terui gave us an hour, we might as well use it.”Phillip tried talking in innuendos! I'm so proud of him

[tayles]

Ah~ I rarely see 'ought' written by anyone not British, I guess. Still, that's useful info :D

XD

I guess people like to fit Terui into a nice easy stereotype. But he's too awesome for that!