you're making me sick, love

Apr 18, 2014 21:11

title: you're making me sick, love
pairing: kai/d.o
length: 4.3k
summary: (canon!fic) In which Kyungsoo has to deal with one-sided love for two years, but technically, he hasn't actually told Jongin yet.
Jongin cares for Kyungsoo but he does not love him... )

starting a new au tag bc i can, au: canon, p: kai/kyungsoo, f: exo, t: you're making me sick love

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kaiice April 20 2014, 10:39:32 UTC
this comment was mighty fine my dear :D

ahh thank you!! you're too kind, and im glad you also liked my characterization ;___;

omfg daughter is too good tho

thank you again <33333333333

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kaiice April 20 2014, 10:49:06 UTC
gonna spot for my kurohchi for when you finally remember your lj password lmao

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kurohchi April 20 2014, 13:01:33 UTC
dude totally didnt have to change passwords again whut

lmao
OKAY BUT SERIOUSNESS
LAU
THIS FIC IS FUCKING AWESOME JUST OH MY

I LOVED THE PUNCH SCENE
THE BUILD UP WAS PERFECT in my opinion *¬*
and just dayum
you know me well lau and just, im not a huge fan of exo
BUT YOUR FICS ALWAYS GET TO ME
THIS ONE ESPECIALLY
it's really realistic in a way and I loved the end
perfect

AND JUST DAYUM GIRL
PLEASE WRITE A BOOK I CANT ENOUGH OF YOUR WRITING

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kaiice April 21 2014, 07:15:55 UTC
hehe dear me what am i going to do with you

OH GOOD I'm glad you thought the build up was right!!!
THIS ONE ESP?? u3u ahhh thank you court!!!

I was going to make the ending sad!!! And just not happy!! But I couldn't!! Bc...I'm a wuss lol

THANKS MY DEAR ITS MEANS ALOT YOUR COMMENTS ALWAYS DO

how about...YOU WRITE SAIRO I WRITE BOOK??? lmao <333

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jonginspuppy April 20 2014, 15:28:15 UTC
This story is great!
And I just want to tell you that yes I agree with what you wrote, jongin is still a baby! And the fact that so many people put weights on his shoulders make me sad u_u

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kaiice April 21 2014, 07:17:33 UTC
Thank you!!! And ikr! I think it's just my bias feelings pulling out of me..but ive always thought that about poor little Jongin

Thanks for commenting!!:)

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slapthecat April 21 2014, 10:33:23 UTC
The moment I laid my eyes on the title, I chocked and I knew I was gonna love it- fact is, I did. Oh gOd I can't even. I can't tell you how many times have I thought about a Kaisoo fic based on Daughter's lovely lovely songs, and when I found one that was taken from my ultimate favorite Daughter song ever, I became biased and loved it before actually getting into it hahha. Seriously though, the first time I heard Love, I broke down because the lyrics were so beautiful and in depth and I had it on replay everyday (until this very day.) Moving on to the fic itself, you just made everything so perfect for me, wow seriously you managed to pull what I actually imagine how these two would interact. Jongin was so ughhhhhhhh in here, it weakens me (fucking cute oblivious jongin is the real kim jongin). And Kyungsoo, omg that scene where he punches Jongin square in the face almost made me fistbump myself because- damn, he needs to let out those frustrations. This made it to my favorites, biased or not, it made it's way up there. P/s: areyoua ( ... )

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kaiice April 21 2014, 14:11:08 UTC
itS YOUR FAVORITE SONG??? MINE TOO!!!!! *__* i think, because once i first heard it i was in love (no pun intended) and couldn't stop listening to it--either that, or run bc that was the first song i ever heard of theirs and introduced me to them.
i would base all my fics on their songs if i could ACK I AM SO GLAD PEOPLE KNOW OF THEM BC THEY'RE TOO GOOD NOT TO BE NOTICED

and thank you so much, you're so kind ;___; people keep saying i hit the characterization (idk how lol) really well...and..im really thankful!!

and favorites!?!?! LET ME HUG YOU THANK YOU!!! and i am the biggest fan they are definitely one of my fav bands ever!! and yes hehe dont be shy i love making friends!!! do you have a tumblr or twitter we can talk on or something like that? :D

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slapthecat April 22 2014, 10:01:01 UTC
yes yAs omg I can definitely say that at least 3 of their songs are in my top 10 list of all time bc every single song is fucking amazing ;; This is actually my first time spazzing about them oh god thank you for existing. Run is quEEN ugh and I've always wanted to read a fic based on Candles because honestly that 'I'll never be your lover, I only bring the heat, company under covers, filling space in your sheets' quote gets on my emotional side every. time. Aw I really like your writing though. I just made an account like, yesterday lmao but I've been on lj over a year now and I've read some of your fics before. Hugs omg yes please sQUEEZE LIFT PAT PAT idk that's my hugging style. No please don't find me on twitter, you'll regret it hahah but yes I do have tumblr. Not sure how to fully use it, but I'm pretty confident so yes: I'm rhinoshroom. We already have two things in common, and trust me when I say knowing you love Kaisoo and Daughter is enough for me

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kaiice April 24 2014, 13:22:29 UTC
hehe you're too nice lol, and thank you for reading my fics!!! ;__; i would totally base all my fics on daughter songs but then i would have unresolved angsty feelings...lol

i shall find you on tumblr and spaz about daughter there! okay? okay.

I LIKE YOUR HUGGING STYLE PAT PAT

kaisoo and daughter is #lyfe

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curiousocurious April 21 2014, 11:20:48 UTC
At the end I would like to think that Jongin has some kinda feelings for Kyungsoo rather than trying for a relationship just because his best friend is in pain because he is in love with him and he wants to stop the pain.

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kaiice April 21 2014, 13:59:58 UTC
Yes, yes you are right!!! i wrote the fic in mind that after soo kisses jongin, jongin realizes while he wants to stop the pain, he really does care for kyungsoo and finds out he does quite like the kisses ehehe

thanks for reading :)

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