#121: Dawning

[kaifectionery]

Title: Dawning
Pairing(s): Joonmyun/Jongin
Rating: PG
Length: 10.2k
Warning(s): [Please click to open.]wolf au, implied/mentions of mpreg
Summary: Joonmyun and Jongin find a lost pup, and maybe a little more.

Comments

[caterplina]

This is my prompt and i ABSOLUTELY LOVED YOUR FIC!!!
i will come back again tomorrow to write a more detailed comment. but let me tell you, i couldn't stop smiling. everything was perfect.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR PUP SEHUN!!

[caterplina]

First of all, thank you so much for picking this prompt and for doing such a great job on it :)

I loved how you started the fic, the image of the wolves from a different POV. I was expecting you to start directly with the characters, but i loved how you first set the scene like that and then moved onto Joonmyun. His POV was perfect, all of this thoughts and feelings were so greatly written for me. I smiled all through the fic even if he was feeling down, pinning silently and subconsciously lol there was a moment that made me so happy:

"He doesn’t like leaving Jongin behind, or Sehun. It’s the thought of them - knowing that his little found family is counting on him - that spurs Joonmyun into completing his task. With a mouth full of rabbits, Joonmyun proudly makes his way back to their camp to drop them at Jongin’s feet. He doesn’t have a mate, and Jongin isn’t his omega, but his chest balloons with pride when Jongin strokes long fingers through his fur, pushing his face to Joonmyun’s to thank him."I loved this part

[snapbaeks]

Djskhd I loved this!!!!
You did such a wonderful job setting this story and building this world and I adored all of your characterization.
Truly, excellent job!
I really have a thing for sukai where one or both of them are totally in love but are too blind to notice it so thank you for writing that dynamic so well!!
And little pup sehun was the cutest thing.
Thanks for this 💕💕

[ext_3721022]

I REALLY LOVED THIS SO MUCH!!
Sukai is my weakness and you did such a great job writing them, I don't usually read wolf au but this was really interesting and easy to understand so really thank you for this!!

[haixiao]

Oh, this was so wonderful! I love sukai and I'm a sucker for wolf!aus so this was the perfect combination for me, haha.
I love how easy and comfortable their relationship was (and always had been) and how they'd practically been mates even before Junmyeon realized that that was what he had wanted. It was so nice to see how they cared for each other and took care of each other. The part at the end, after Jongin had been claimed, where Jongin said he felt "whole". ;______; My heart.
This was such a delight to read. Your style and flow were great, the characterizations and relationships were wonderful, and overall this was just such a nice and refreshing story. I look forward to reading more of your work!

[alexa31]

This was just-- perfection!!!

I loved every moment of it!! It's so wonderfully sweet and domestic! And to have my OTP written like this, and in wolf!au as well!! Makes!! Me!! So!! Happy!!!!

I loved the characters, and the little details. I loved Sehun!! And Baekhyun and Kris, too! I just loved everything and it all came together so well!! This is a really enjoyable fic!! ^^ Thank you for it!