#28: Primrose Blossoms

Jan 04, 2017 18:00

Title: Primrose Blossoms
Pairing(s): jongin/d.o.
Rating: r
Length: 11,595
Warning(s): [Please click to open.]mentions of depression and suicide, angst/fluff
Summary: jongin thought he’d never see the love of his life again, but little did he know Fate had a little more in store for him.

Author's Note: first of all, thank you so much to the people that helped and ( Read more... )

round one, pairing: jongin/d.o., rating: r

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yoshpet January 5 2017, 20:44:33 UTC
I have to admit I didn't know anything about the prompt or the plot, I just started reading because it's kaisoo and I felt like. I really appreciate that you took up the challenge of writing about death (even suicide) and the life after it (which is Jongin's grief and despair) - very few writers dare to do it. A lot of people don't want to think about these things, so they forget it's also part of life. It's reality too. And I'm totally into angsty slice of life stories, so I'm glad I found this one ( ... )

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beingexo January 6 2017, 02:28:49 UTC
HELLO PROMPTER HERE AND I AM CRYING!!!
SEUNGSOO!! I did kind of wonder why he never actually said his best friends name, and it's because his best friend is Seungsoo.
I can't honestly say that I can understand what Jongin but I sure felt how miserable Jongin felt with losing the love of this life. I'd be a mess too.
Are they in space???? I love space omg I was so surprised when he went into the other world because I wasn't expecting it to be sci-fi, but I personally love it!!
I'll definitely look forward to whatever else you have in store for this au!

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88x12 January 6 2017, 16:10:15 UTC
the way you portrayed jongin's raw emotions after his best friend died felt sososo real. the angst ohmygosh ;~; my heart hurt for him so bad. to be quiet honest, i didn't expect this to turn into a sci-fic/futuristic story, but i enjoyed reading it very much nonetheless. i'm so glad that you will continue this au after reveals because i believe that some questions are yet to be answered. i look forward to the continuation. thank you so much for writing this! ♥♥

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akigia January 7 2017, 12:11:20 UTC
This was so unexpected woooiw when i got to the funeral part i was like 'oh nooooo angst i cant do angst' but im not the type who only judges things based from the start so i carried on thinking there for sure must be a plot twist. And boy there was!!! You did an amazing job w/ portraying jongin's feelings from the beginning to the end! The sudden (up)turn and the sci-fi element got me like '!!!!!' so im very excited and curious where and how the story will go! (btw Your description of kyungsoo awww ;; he's so beautiful)))

Just the fact that you didnt give up and managed to push this through is amazing and im very happy for you! So thank you for writing and sharing w/ us <3

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jonginspuppy January 8 2017, 02:03:43 UTC
I honesty don't know anything about the prompt. It's surprisingly very interesting to read. Angst is not my cup of tea but this doesn't give angst vibe at all. You put the angst in the beginning and made me see how Jongin's life after that (which is rare). You made me wonder that was it Kyungsoo!!! But of course doe eyed and heart shaped lips is Kyungsoo but no it was Seungsoo!!! This is so fucking mindblowing but in the end we finally meet Kyungsoo (who was also Seungsoo?!?! the said best friend). I hope life is good for Jongin and Kyungsoo (or Seungsoo?!?!) in the end. Such a great story to read!!!

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