#309: in my universe, only you exist

Dec 29, 2016 20:44

Title: in my universe, only you exist
Pairing(s): Kai/Chen
Rating: PG-13
Length: 11k
Summary: Jongin sleeps and wakes up in different dream worlds each time, but the one constant in them is Jongdae.

Author's Note: Dear prompter, your prompt fascinated me from the get-go and refused to leave me alone. I guess it was a fate meant to be. I genuinely ( Read more... )

round one, rating: pg13, pairing: jongin/chen

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hyukbins December 30 2016, 03:35:06 UTC
wowowow it's been a while since i last read any actual exo fic - that isn't chansoo coughs - and this was So Good!!! from the way you write - i'm in love with your narrative -, tell the story, the creativity on the dreams, everything seems like it was really well thought, it was such a pleasant reading, it did not feel like 11k words at all!!! thank you for the amazing story <3

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capricious_moon February 1 2017, 13:25:05 UTC
Hello! Ahh, I'm very honored you picked this as your non-Chansoo fic in a long time ;u; I'm also happy to know you enjoyed reading it, your comment is making me smile so wide as I reply to it. Thank you so much for giving the fic a chance, it's highly and deeply appreciated! ^o^

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soybean_88 December 30 2016, 03:57:49 UTC
This was really sweet, and the alternative worlds you described were so detailed. Jongin and Jongdae have such a wonderful dynamic, in all worlds!

*runs off to listen to Weathercast's I Like You*

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capricious_moon February 1 2017, 13:28:10 UTC
Hello! I'm relieved you find this sweet since I owe Chenkai at least this after all the angst I've put them through in some of my fics LOL TUT I hope you like the song, if you've listened to it!

Thank you for reading! ^^

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yagakat December 31 2016, 23:59:57 UTC
This was great! You put so much thought and detail into the different dream worlds, and they were all so enjoyable. Thank you for writing this!!

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capricious_moon February 1 2017, 13:37:56 UTC
Hello! I had to make the dream worlds distinct from each other so some careful thinking has been put into them [and some crying], that's why comments like yours make it feel twice as rewarding =3

And thank you for reading! ^^

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thebakaberry January 1 2017, 18:38:52 UTC
This was so cute!!! I absolutely love the little glimpses into another au with the dreams and how you managed to tie them in with reality. this was honestly so creative and well done and honestly I'm just happy you wrote kaichen because there's never enough kaichen in the world <33333 thank you for writing this you did such a great job!

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capricious_moon February 1 2017, 13:41:46 UTC
Hello! I'm so flattered you think this was creative and well done ;~; The plot isn't anything new if you strip this fic down to its basic core, so I decided on putting a new spin to it. I'm glad it paid off in the end, and I'm glad you found it cute X3

there's never enough kaichen in the world

Truer words have never been spoken! There's never enough fic for them, so I'm always thankful for the handful we get ;u;

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment, it's much appreciated! ^o^

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caterplina January 2 2017, 02:27:46 UTC
this fic is absolutely beautiful. i can't tell you how much i loved it. seriously.
first of all, your writing. i loved each and every sentence and the story had a certain flow that i loved. i really don't know how to explain, but you created a beautiful atmosphere for this fic. i enjoyed reading it so much!
one thing i loved a lot was how jongin dreamed of something and in the next scene there were references to that dream, like the shoes or the sweets.
another very interesting thing is your knowledge of korea and korean culture (all the food mentions).

my comments lacks a lot in comparison to how i felt while reading the fic. so I'll just tell you that it's one of my favorite fics from the fest and will be so until the end of the fest. it won't be easy to forget this beautiful story ^^

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capricious_moon February 1 2017, 13:59:44 UTC
Hello! Oh no, what is this lovely comment, what did I do to deserve this ;o;

I'm pleased to know you enjoyed reading this! I guess I was going for a dreamlike mood no matter if it was real world life or the dream world? Something whimsical, if you may.

TBH my knowledge of Korea and Korean culture that I applied here came from research [read: Google and Wiki], but some came from K-Dramas too ^^

And please don't think your comment is lacking! I enjoyed reading it, it made me feel warm all over. I'm so touched that you consider this one of your favorite fics from the fest; that's a really high honor considering there are other more wonderful works here ;u; Still, thank you so much for taking the time to read and leaving a comment, I definitely appreciate it a lot! ^o^

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