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[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [3/?]

Apr 24, 2007 02:56

Chapter 3

He who fights monsters should look into it that he himself does not become a monster. When you gaze long into the Abyss, the Abyss also gazes into you.

-Friedrich Nietzsche

Park Yoochun threw open the door to his office with a bang, impatiently shrugging off his suit jacket and loosening his tie. It was ( Read more... )

dong bang shin ki, fanfic, wasn't there, jaeho, horror, yoosu, mystery

Comments 25

redmist_23 April 24 2007, 10:14:56 UTC

yay. First.

Junsu finally made his appearance, naked no less or nearly.

tumi18 April 24 2007, 10:23:17 UTC

hiiii!!!

tumi18 April 24 2007, 10:40:50 UTC

*squee*
YooSu's 1st encounter with junsu's very much naked is <3333

sooooooo... jaejoong working in a gay club???
hmmmmmmm............

yingfa89 April 24 2007, 10:24:01 UTC

I think, if my mother hadn't been there, that I would have laugh outloud when I read the ending!!! I sure as heck was grinning madly though^^Yunho sure is lucky!!

Poor them, working so hard and not getting much done! At least they each got something to work on! I'm also looking forward to seeing Junsu and Changmin's roles in this story!

Thank you very much for the next one! I can't wait for the next chapter!

kai_yukashi April 24 2007, 10:28:20 UTC

omg you guys either read super fast, or it wasn't nearly as long as I thought it was. O__O

I took the ending as higher being (me) making a cosmic joke outta Yunho. XDDDDDD

oncloud999 April 24 2007, 10:52:34 UTC

hahaha!! Junsu naked!! <333 XD

ah... i figured as much about JaeJae... XD (those years of reading yaoi manga has finally proven to be useful. *tear*) haha, YES!! get to the Jaeho and Yoosu bits!! they all sound like they need a bit of loving. ♥ ♥ ♥ altho the whole story itself is nice, it's suspenseful yet not too angsty. =)

can't wait for next chapter!! ♥

kai_yukashi April 24 2007, 18:52:56 UTC

it'll get...very angsty. .___. XD But that's still a chapter or two away I think.

blueokami April 24 2007, 11:41:52 UTC

8D Junsu's moment of glory as he makes his appearance, and I can see Yoochun nose bleeding all over it x3

You have such an amusing writing style =D and I love the way you portray the characters, can't wait to find out what's really going on and if Changmin has anything to do with this <3

I'll be stalking you for the nxt chapter =)