Very nice response to the prompt--a good look at how grimy his life is without being over the top, I like that. He's a tough kid, all right. It must be genetic, that ability to survive all odds. I'd love to see what happens next--I'm sure it's going to be fireworks.
Sam's character is so interesting. He's so strong that you almost wanna see him break, just a little. And I can't believe you ended it there! Will there be more?
Please don't leave it there! This is a great beginning - so sad and lonely - and I need to see what happens next. Do they boys establish a brother like friendship? A romantic one?
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Thanks for sharing this.
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Thank you :D
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