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Pieces of Her Epilogue

Aug 10, 2011 20:28

Title: Pieces of Her, Epilogue
Author: Kagekamay
Rating: R
Length: 1376
Spoilers: AU after Special Education
Summary: Contrary to popular belief, Rachel Berry wasn't unbreakable. Now she's broken and the only person who can put her back together is Quinn Fabray. WARNING deals with self harm.

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nightcuddler August 11 2011, 11:48:10 UTC

Thank you for a happy ending

ayden07 August 12 2011, 03:38:26 UTC

*is bowing to the computer* THANK YOU FOR A BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND HEARTFELT STORY. THIS IS EPIC FABERRY, DESPITE THE PAIN AND ANGST. BUT THEY GOT THROUGH IT TOGETHER. WONDERFUL FIC!! =)

ext_729580 August 12 2011, 08:55:59 UTC

^ I AM ALSO BOWING IN FRONT OF MY COMPUTER.

This was just too beautiful for words. Amazing. Fantastic. Wonderful. I would shout praises of this story out in the street if people wouldn't stare at me like some kind of crazy escaped asylum patient.

Really though, this was beautiful. <333 thank you so much!

Thanks! joan_jade_md August 13 2011, 19:33:07 UTC

That was a great story. But to be honest, I kept on wishing that something really bad happened to Finn. Or at least Rachel standing up to Finn making Finn realized how much of an asshole she was, and that he was a bigger slut than Rachel. I mean, I'm sorry... You just written Finn's "assholeness" (ok, I know that's not a word, anyway...) Other than that, your story's still awesome. Thank you for posting this!

Re: Thanks! joan_jade_md August 13 2011, 19:35:59 UTC

ok, sorry for the wrong grammar. I mean making Finn realize how much of an asshole HE was... And I just realized that I wasn't able to finish what I'm about to say about Finn's "assholeness". I mean, you just wrote that part so freaking well, that while I was reading through it, I seriously want to punch him in the face or kick him on the groin. And Sam too! But not as badly as I want to hit Finn.

Re: Thanks! kagekamay August 13 2011, 20:56:32 UTC

I'm right there with you! I originally did have a bit more Finn but the story kind of steered away from him. He is an asshole though. Thanks so much for commenting!

Re: Thanks! joan_jade_md August 14 2011, 13:49:58 UTC

No problem. A well-written story such as yours deserves to be commented.

miss_darkmoon August 13 2011, 19:52:23 UTC

Amazing. Realistic in its happy ending, heartbreaking, raw, beautiful... the part where Quinn saw the word on Rachel's arm was like, wow. (I'm commenting on both new parts).

I don't think I have the adequate words to sum up how happy this story makes me, and how great it is to see the end. In the sense that, I mean, 'yay they got a happy ending' not 'yay there's no more'. You know what I mean. Thank you for sharing this amazing piece.

kagekamay August 13 2011, 20:54:40 UTC

Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment :)