Stories #2

[kage_ankoku]

My brain is sore. o.o It was a rough day at work, listening to the same radio station all day in an already noisy assembly room. I've got this god-awful song stuck in my head now too. But it's worth it, just to make a little cash

Comments

[pirate_mousie]

*wibble* Every time Von is mentioned I hate him more and more. Barrick and Rika need some cuddles. *throws Duex and Double at them*

[kage_ankoku]

He tends to have that effect. I find my self devising more brutal ways for him to die every time I go further into the things he's caused.

They do need some cuddles. They're so sad. *Barrick and Rika immediately snuggle against Due and Double*

So how was the writing in this story?

I pretty close to deciding if I should join the community or not (I'm leaning towards yes). :3

[pirate_mousie]

In a ditch, covered in petrol, on fire.

I really liked the writing in this one. You get a real sense of what Barrick and even Rika are going through.

Huzzah! ^^ More people must see these methinks.

[kage_ankoku]

Now there's one idea that I haven't entertained yet, and I like it. I was considering something that would be slow and painful, over several days.

Really? That's good. I wasn't sure if I conveyed what they were feeling well enough. ^^

Aw. *blushes* Thanks. I'm typing up a intro post right now. ^^