Whoo fanfic!
Title: Untitled
Pairing: France X England, France X Vietnam
Warning: T for some sex
Summary: Arthur catches France cheating on him. Angst ensues.
( Angst ahead! )
Pairing: France X England, France X Vietnam
Warning: T for some sex
Summary: Arthur catches France cheating on him. Angst ensues.
( Angst ahead! )
Comments 1
I really liked how you've got the stark contrast of the mood at the begining and the end of the fic, and how you can feel England's pain...
Favourite phrase: "the other nation chases him, to try to offer false comforts and explanations that would sound so pretty that they could only be lies." - I think it really hits home with how England would mistrust anything that France would say afterwards and that anything that actually came out of his mouth would only likely make things even worse...
Overall, I loved it; you portrayed all of the emotion really well =D
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