Ouran High School Host Club > Fanfic/Drabbles > Some Princes Become Kings (Part 4)

[kagayachou]

Heya! This will be the last update I make on the drabbles until the end of the month or so, because I'm literally moving half way around the world from university to see my parents again! Don't let that stop you from leaving comments though ^_~ I'll be busy packing, and recovering from jet lag, but I'll read and respond to comments when I can, and

Comments

[zazie_la_beast]

You make me want to type in capital letters, I'm so happy. I read through all of these and, gosh... the urge to jump into the screen and hug Tamaki to death was almost unbearable. He's so darn CUTE. And Kyouya, poor Kyouya XD. Giving his first kiss away to a niave cute idiot.

The last drabble gave me hope though. Tamaki is thinking about the kiss, at least.

[kagayachou]

Haha, thank you for restraining from all-caps, as well as for commenting ^_^ I'm happy to hear you got so into the fic. Yes, Tamaki is a bit of an idiot sometimes, but that's part of what the Host Club love about him...

Kyouya probably feels like a better idiot at the mo.

[dawnsama]

These are excellent. Kyouya is a tricky guy to pin down, which makes your characterization of him all the more great. Also, props to developing a plausible Tamaki/Kyouya. It's a pairing that I often find hard to believe, since Tamaki is so crazy about Haruhi that I find it hard to accept that he'd turn to Kyouya for romance. But it works in this fanfic.

I like how at the end of this chapter, Tamaki assumes the same thing Haruhi did during beach episode-- that Kyouya only did questionable things for his own good, because he wanted to show him. OF course, in this case, it's clear that it was not part of Kyouya's master plan, but it's so like Tamaki to assume such a thing of him.

Anyway, I've been saving all the parts of this fanfic in my memories. Hope to see more soon!

[kagayachou]

And reading that comment was excellent ^_~ As for Tamaki/Kyouya (Wow, Tamaki on top!), I think I have it easy with Haruhi conveniently out of the picture at this point in time. I don't actually have a plan, you see. With Tamaki and Kyouya, I was just going to write how they got together to form the Host Club, and then fangirl mode kicked in for... the above *L* I just know that I'd like to introduce Hikaru & Kaoru, Honey and Mori eventually as well, but that's as much of a plan as I have for this fanfic.

When Tamaki started channeling Haruhi I grew a bit concerned about how in character I was writing him, but then, it felt right, you know what I mean? So I stuck with it. ^^

I'm flattered you like it enough to put it in your memories, thank you!

[nirvanaplacebo]

I'm really loving these drabbles so far (probably because I'm a drabbles fan in general and really like Tamaki/Kyoya *TAMAKI ON TOP*) and this was my favorite installment yet for obvious reasons. I, just like everyone else, love that Kyoya gave away his first kiss. It really packs a punch, because I really love the idea of them being eachother's first kiss. It's really... sweet, I suppose?

And when you said it was one sided shounen-ai, until I read the kiss, I was actually thinking that Tamaki had more feelings towards Kyoya in that respect because of the whole clothes fixing thing and the fact that Kyoya in the morning was his happiest thought. So I was actually a little suprised (even though it always seems to be Kyoya liking Tamaki instead of viceversa because of Haruhi) when Kyoya did what he did. Oh well.

I really like it and can't wait to see the club starting business. AND PLEASE LET THERE BE ANOTHER KISS.

(+ Memories)

[nirvanaplacebo]

WAIT. HOLD ON. ON YOUR LAST ONE IT SAID NC-17. (Please change it back. Please! *begs*)

[kagayachou]

Oh, I had it on NC-17 for strangulation, and some such. For the violence... ^^; See, they're fourteen.
If they do end up having some sort of sexual relationship for example, it'd have to wait until probably after my story. Kyouya wouldn't be caught having underaged sex, or something, and Tamaki would start going on about the sanctity of marriage first. ^^

[nirvanaplacebo]

Haha, I know. I was kidding. I think that the story runs well enough as it is.

TAMAKI IS SO CUTE. He was never my favorite, but he's steadily earning more love from me.(Sanctity of marriage. So Tamaki.)

[red_planet31]

Oh poor poor confused Tamaki... and Kyouya... Hahaha. Tamaki is so innocent and naive. Hehe.

“Mommy!”

I actually thought Tamaki was calling Kyouya. ^_^; XP

Can't wait to read more!

[kagayachou]

Tamaki is... at a transitional stage on the "mommy" front. He thinks of his mother and Kyouya a lot, and Kyouya would never really replace his mother (thankfully), but there will probably be a point when he could call Kyouya "mommy" and Kyouya would acknowledge it with "daddy", like in the manga. I'll keep working at how *L*

[red_planet31]

Ah..... just like a married couple. *cracks up* ;P

[kagayachou]

My thoughts exactly! ^__^

[kagayachou]

Thank you very much! I just fixed that typo ^_^ Hehe, rewrote it so much... (something like "Kyouya wasn't looking when", I think)

And thank you for the nice comments, and the Isshin stamp of approval, or wait, is it Tamaki? Which one is Otou-sama? *fangirl cries BOTH - with Ryuuken on top, or where ever he fits* I'm glad you love these drabbles, and that quote. If you make a layouy for that quote, please show me, ne? ^_^

[kagayachou]

Haha, me too, in my last response (layout, not layouy) X3

Wai, Isshin AND Tamaki? Thank you, thank you~ *faints with Ukitake/anyone* Yay!