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kaelaaw

Worlds Apart Part 41

Feb 10, 2011 20:20

Oriel was jealous that Johar got to have his PoV and so this next part is written from Oriel's. Also I apologize now for the tease at the end. I'm horney as hell and to sick to do anything about it!

( Part 41 )

gorlyn, worlds apart, neisk, oriel, tocus

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darkblue_ice February 11 2011, 05:40:30 UTC

Uh oh! Tocus is in trooooooouble!

kaelaaw February 11 2011, 05:59:08 UTC

lol he loves being in trouble he has his own personal space there with a big comfy chair, a big screen t.v. and a cold chest of beer.

ayune01 February 11 2011, 13:16:55 UTC

first time Neisk loop through time.
awesome!

kaelaaw February 13 2011, 04:16:07 UTC

he didn't loop through time just space and he rarely does it and never twice in less then five mintues. It was a first for him.

vierra000 February 11 2011, 16:17:19 UTC

=D loved it cant w8 for more =)

kaelaaw February 13 2011, 04:15:15 UTC

thank you I will try to get the next one up soon.

thalassa_ipx February 11 2011, 18:20:57 UTC

I loved this chapter!!!!!

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!!

kaelaaw February 13 2011, 04:14:36 UTC

I'm glad you liked it :)

littleni February 12 2011, 14:06:39 UTC

Oriel has some serious explaining to do to Neisk, and what did Gorlyn do to his bed I wonder? Was Neisk monitioring Gorlyn as well? Is that how he knew what had just happened?

So many questions and a evil cliffie, gotta respect the evil cliffie routine!

Update soon Y/Y??

kaelaaw February 13 2011, 04:13:58 UTC

Oriel and Neisk will compare notes later I'm just not sure if I want to do it from Neisk's POV or Oriel's.....

The questions about the monitoring and how he knew will be answered in the next update which I am trying to hammer out now!

littleni February 13 2011, 13:05:54 UTC

Hammer faster woman!!!!!

kaelaaw February 14 2011, 05:50:50 UTC

I had a really good rythme going and then my motherboard went out on me. I'm reduced to using my netbook.

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