She's such a bitch, isn't she? -.- Are you sure she isn't related to Lesia? Well, anyway, I guess in a way it was just what Neisk needed, to test his new thoughts about taking control over the household.
She is bitch for sure. The main difference between her and Leisa however is that she is more about being Queen bee then pure sadism. Despite all her protests about not treating Gorlyn like a servant she would have done the same to a serving girl she thought was lying to her. Also a bit in her defense she sees Gorlyn as a criminal who is only getting what he deserves. Leisa would still have done what she did to Gorlyn even if she knew he was innocent.
That's an important difference. And as bitchy as I still think she is, I do understand her a bit better now. Silvya thinking he is a criminal and has really done something really bad, does explain it a bit.
Yeah she is still very much a bitch just not really a sadistic one. She doesn't give as much thought into how she might hurt others and Leisa does. And she can be sincerely nice if she wants to. I don't think Leisa can.
I just caught up with this fic read it all through and loved every bit! I feel like Neisk and Gorlyn are people I really know! Please, please, please continue and finish this fic! A devoted reader! (PS, If you need a beta I don't often volunteer, as a single mum working full time I don't get much time, but I would be happy to help you with grammar, etc if you want it!) All the best thanks for all the wondeful hours of reading pleasure! :)
I'm so glad you like it and that Neisk and Gorlyn feel real. Sometimes I think of them as real people. I plan to finish it I really do. I don't know what a beta is I see it in other posts but havn't yet figured out what it means but I would love help with grammer and such. My sister is a single mom her daughter is 3 years old and autistic so I try to write on my days off but sometimes on my days off I go pick up my niece so my sister can have a day to herself. And thank you for the lovely comments!
A beta is someone who helps with the fic - a type of editor. I do understand about the 'time' element and think it great that you support your sister and her daughter. I am a teacher currently on holiday so I do have a little time, but once school goes back there is no time for much else. I am happy to send you my email if you wish. :)
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She's such a bitch, isn't she? -.- Are you sure she isn't related to Lesia? Well, anyway, I guess in a way it was just what Neisk needed, to test his new thoughts about taking control over the household.
...and in walked Tocus.
Uh... oh... He's going to misinterpret things!!
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Yes he will.
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But not the way I thought :-)
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