Ficlet: Breathless (3/4 in the Breathing series)

[kae_nine]

Title: Breathless
Series: Breathing - Story 3/4
Author: Kaethel (

Comments

[usaku]

Great job with his voice, it felt very natural. I'm enjoying this series quite a bit!

[kae_nine]

Glad you're enjoying the series. Thank you. :)

[salimali]

Oh you captured Jacks voice perfectly. Just brilliant.
Is the week dragging by for you too?

[kae_nine]

Unbearably long for me as well. And yet I know that once Saturday's come and gone I'll be sad because there won't be my weekly episode to look forward to. *Sobs*

[catsfiction]

This series has been fantastic, but I particularly love your thoughtful glimpse into Jack here. He is always the one in the background, the forgotten man who thinks ahead and saves so many, many lives while others are given the emotional space that they need.

I really want more Jack interaction next week, particularly with Rose. Like the way you plugged a few plot holes, too.

[kae_nine]

Thanks. :) Yes, Jack deserves more screen-time, and I want to see him interact both with Ten and Rose this weekend. After all, he hasn't seen Rose since Satellite Five. That's years ago. So the reunion should be dealt with as well.

[sunnytyler001]

Awww!! Dear old loyal Jack!

[kae_nine]

Yep! Jack to the rescue, always!

[sprdr]

This is awesome... This is the Jack I like ; caring, loyal and hopeful... Another great piece of work....

[kae_nine]

Thank you. Yes, Jack's tough but he's a softie underneath, very sensitive willing to sacrifice everything for the sake of the people he loves. :)