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Doctor Who: Fanfiction: "The Very Last Christmas Ever--For Now"

Dec 24, 2010 17:33

Title: The Very Last Christmas Ever-For Now
Author: Unknown Kadath, aka kadath_or_bust
Rating: G
Characters: 11th Doctor, Amy, Jackie, and Rose
Spoilers: Not really-vague references to End of Time.
Summary: The Doctor revisits Christmas Past to keep a promise to Rose.
Disclaimer: Don't own it.
Beta: tempusdominus10

( Amy’s curiosity didn’t get the better of her until the Doctor handed her the blowgun. )

christmas, eleventh doctor, fanfiction, amy, crackfic, rose, doctor who

Comments 10

tempusdominus10 December 25 2010, 00:11:19 UTC

OOOO

Loved this loved this loved this!

And I didn't really do anything much, just a couple of ideas for italics and one or two grammar questions I had; you're brilliant all on your own. You know you are!

That said, oh boy oh boy I get to read it twice!

othermewriter December 25 2010, 01:19:13 UTC

Unfair you have me balling like a baby now. So very sad. Our poor Doctor.

badwolfjen December 25 2010, 03:43:19 UTC

I loved this story, it's so sweet.

karuri December 25 2010, 05:57:44 UTC

Absolutely adorable and well done with regards to Ten/Rose. Good to see the pain fade for him.

But omg MILITANT TOASTERS! Now I have an image of Cylons marching in military uniforms with bayonets over their shoulders....

_thirty2flavors December 25 2010, 05:59:36 UTC

Awww, this was very sweet! I liked the narration you used for Eleven, especially in the first section, a very subtle sort of humour. Amy was very sweet in this too, and I liked that the Doctor finds the memories "more sweet than bitter" --- it's very spot on to how I think Eleven would feel about Rose now, even if he was reluctant to consider it at first.

And I liked the part about the weird graffiti, because seriously what is that thing?