Fic: Doctor Who: Pillar of Salt 2/6

[kadath_or_bust]

Author: kadath_or_bust, aka Unknown Kadath
Words: 4,000
Rating: T
Series: The Other Egg of the Phoenix (but stands alone)
Summary: On a beach in Norway, Rose Tyler made a choice. Now she’s wondering if she made a mistake-and where she can go from here.
Thanks to my lovely betas: tardis-mole, my alarmingly thorough nit-picky beta, Mornea, my

Comments

[jennytork]

I LOVE the way you've got that "Chiswick Mumble" in his speech! Very John Entwistle....

[kadath_or_bust]

I was just going for a bit of Donna. I'm an American and have no idea what you're talking about whatsoever--but I'm VERY glad I seem to have got it right. Thanks!

[imzadimylove]

I am enjoying this fic very much. I like the fact that he isn't overly emotional - like other fics that have him showing a lot of anger or too much neediness. You have the balance just right!

Can't wait for more!

[kadath_or_bust]

Thank you--although things will probably get more emotional as the story (and series) progress. But I'm trying to exercise restraint.

[kadath_or_bust]

Thank you--compliments make me write more! (Not always a good thing from my point of view, because I have other things to get done, but I suppose it works well for you.:))

[tempusdominus10]

MMMmmm. Very delicious. And Unsettling. aNd wonderfully, horribly unsure. (this is chellusA)

hee

[kadath_or_bust]

Thanks ... hey! What are you unsettled about? You just beta'd this thing!

Cheeky.

[tempusdominus10]

Unsettling as a reader immersed in the story! haha. CHEEKY BACK!

The emotions you're playing with are very volatile, very present, and very unsettling. ANd you dance them beautifully, you silly git. hee hee. I am looking forward to more!!!!

[lucyd3]

Oh yes, excellent Doctor - I can hear the Donna in the way he talks, it's just right!

[kadath_or_bust]

Thank you--I worked hard on that, I'm glad it turned out well.