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kachica

Vacation (1/3)

Feb 12, 2011 22:50

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chloe/oliver, multi-chapter, fanfic, vacation, chlollie

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luminare91 February 13 2011, 02:24:36 UTC

i really like this. It's a good beginning. I can't wait to read more.

kachica February 13 2011, 02:35:11 UTC

Thanks for the feedback! :)

serafina19 February 13 2011, 04:35:26 UTC

I really like the first chapter. The way they're brought together, the simple conversation outside and the subsequent dances. Lois was spot-on too.

I hope you continue this.

kachica February 13 2011, 13:09:26 UTC

Thanks, Sera! I'm not much of a writer... I hope I can finish it, it bothers me to let things unfinished. Already have the line up of the story, just need to put into paragraphs and dialogues.lol.

ms_mojo_risin71 February 13 2011, 05:14:10 UTC

Oh Keiko!! You know I adore this story so much....PRESSURE!!! LOL, hopefully your muse hits you!
"Dancing they way they wanted, in a rhythm entirely theirs. Like they were lost in each other’s eyes.">Still my favorite part, just beautiful! :) Can't wait for the next part b/c it's amazing.

P.S. Love the new layout!!
xoxox
Love,
~Mellie

kachica February 13 2011, 13:11:12 UTC

hahahaha. Thanks, Mel for your help and support. And thanks about the layout, took me sometime to get it right.

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kachica February 13 2011, 16:39:15 UTC

Thanks, Cara! About Lex we will see it. :)

madlenita February 13 2011, 20:59:52 UTC

Very, very interesting beginning....So
So this story is canon until season 7 and without Oliver in season 6?

kachica February 13 2011, 21:25:13 UTC

Thnaks and to answer your question, it's more or less like that.