Fic: Of Nothing in Particular (Sirius/James, R)

[kabeyk]

Okay. If you ignore the wangst at the start, the rest isn't too bad. And don't even ask about the title. Apologies for how badly cross-posted this will very soon be.

EDIT: Oh god, sorry; I'd forgotten that all my little fic-things were for people. So, for spessartine:

Title: Of Nothing in Particular
Pairing: Sirius/James
Rating: R, maybe nearly NC17, so be

Comments

[reddwarfer]

This fic reminds me of why I usually do not read James Potter Slash. It was so beautifully painful the way you describe Sirius.AFter all it is clear that James loves Lily in ways that are hard to ignore. It is, therefore, often a bit cruel to whomever he is paired with. *snuggles Sirius* I agree with the earlier post claiming all that first bit was creepy. It is in a way that denotes a more insidious possessiveness. Still brilliant job. :D

Leila

[kabeyk]

Oh I know; this was meant to be more like friendly experimentation, with Sirius getting Remus eventually, but I love this pairing so much too. I rather liked James' possessiveness, but then I think he was only doing it to help Sirius and was actually surprised to enjoy it.

Thank you.

kxx

[scoradh]

Sirius is, quite possibly, in bred. Possessiveness is the best he could hope for. Plus, flaws rock and also equal notSue, durr.

[kabeyk]

I just thought it was a rather sweet idea, him wanting to be Sirius' first, but I seem to have accidentally disturbed a couple of people. Oopsie. Heh.

kxx

[satine901]

You don´t know how happy you have just made me. :) This is very beautifully written and I am ever thankful for this. *adds to memories* I love the interaction between James and Sirius here. They really are the best friends, it is shown in their actions and in the way they talk to each other.

Moreover, the reason I fell in love with this is because everything is just so natural...the feeling of insecurity, the clumsiness in their moves etc. There were many parts where I just wanted to say aloud, "Yes, that´s exactly how it should be!" and I feel very satisfied as a J/S shipper having read this.

‘I- I made you hard?’

‘Yes, you,’ James replied, head bent and biting at Sirius’ shoulder, ‘you made me.’

*loves it* :)

[kabeyk]

Aww, thank you, that's such a lovely comment. I don't write much J/S (though I probably read enough), but I really got very absorbed in this one.

Oh, just thank you, because you really understood what I was trying to do.xx

Thank you.

kxx

[dsbs]

Oh, I wish my comments could be as good as this story. I think it might be one of my favourite Sirius/James ever. Actually, yes it is. I have decided.

I love your James, here, he's so awkward, sweet, and stupid. I'm so glad it wasn't a perfect first kiss. As usual, I wish school was over so I could make better comments, but really, I don't think it would matter, I'm still speech- type-less.

[kabeyk]

Aww, thank you, though I'm sure I could rec you some better ones!

I love James far too much for my own good, heh.

Thank you.x

kxx

[beckaandzac]

There's something very real in this, even for your stuff, which all feels quite real. Maybe it's the sweat, or maybe it's all the detail in the kisses, but this seems like appropriately messy teenage boy sex, which fanfic--even really wonderful fanfic--rarely does. As such, I come out liking it a little less on the surface than some other things you've done (I'm drawn to neatness by nature), but I'm really impressed by it, and it's definitely hot, and as always the banter is perfect. Good job!

Also, the thing you said to _emeraldgreen about doing "that girl thing, to excuse the girlyness," I know I do the exact same thing, so it makes me feel a lot better that someone who writes as well as you do does it too. It's such an easy trick to say "Maybe they are being girly, but ha! at least I'm aware of it!"

[kabeyk]

this seems like appropriately messy teenage boy sex

Oh thank you; that was exactly what I was trying to do! It was strange because I was trying to keep it all easy and matey, but somehow it felt quite emotional. Yeah, so I had to do that girl thing, heh. It's such a good excuse.

Thank you.

kxx

[sethkyne_blue]

Oh crap. That was ridiculously beautiful and sexy as hell.
The hottest parts:
‘See what you’ve done?’ James accused, sliding his kisses round to Sirius’ ear and neck.

‘What I’ve done? Are you sure it isn’t just… because?’

‘Yes… yes, I’m sure,’ James said, and almost moaned, making Sirius sigh and stretch his neck out as James’ kisses reached there.

‘I- I made you hard?’

‘Yes, you,’ James replied, head bent and biting at Sirius’ shoulder, ‘you made me.’

and

Sirius no longer needed any friction at all, because he was watching James come, hearing the strained, desperate noise he made, and following himself, long and hard and the sweetest thing in the world.

I love your fics because they contain meltingly hot passages like the ones above and I always love the exposition you do with getting into the character's heads. Sirius' musings on James and their relationship is just so poignant and lovely.
Lord. I need to go find someone to shag, now. :P

[kabeyk]

Aww, thank you. I'm sure I display far too many of my own kinks in my fic, heh.

Lord. I need to go find someone to shag, now.

Is that an offer? *winks lasciviously*

Sorry, I should possibly stop sleazing on my f-list. Possibly.

Thank you!

kxx

[sethkyne_blue]

Is that an offer? *winks lasciviously*
I'm good for a go if you are! ;D

I should possibly stop sleazing on my f-list. Possibly.
Nah. We enjoy the sleazing far too much. Oh. Well, I do. Um. *looks panicked*

:)