Drabbles are actually more widley acknowledged as fiction that is exactly 100 words. Anything just generally under 200 words is more often referred to as a vignette.
Also? Whoa. How much do we all want to be Lily right now?
Yeah, I know that, but I am incapable of writing anything that is less than 150 words, and the ones that short are the squicky ones, so I thought I'd make up my own system for my fics. Also I can't spell vignette. Or whatever. I just always offer drabbles, despite the fact that I cannae write them properly.
Oh! I liked this situation very much. What a conniving little lad! But don't we love them that way? I particularly liked: And, thankfully, finally, he was his again, or rather theirs, but still his too, just because the phrasing is just perfect and it sounds really rather innocent for some reason.
And you recced me! Wow! Thank you immensely. My first ever time being recced! I would squee! if I was more of a girly-girl, but I'm not so it definitely calls for one triumphant and heartfelt ...
I'm out-of-sorts, but I'm afraid I couldn't tell all these people apart and without checking the title, wouldn't have known who was involved. This was your intention? Sorry. *goes to sleep* Still hot, though.
Yeah, I did want it to be vague. I did rather want to not even put the title on, but I thought that was a bit much. However, I don't think I was clear enough that it's supposed to be two different POV's and I'm trying to work out a way to sort that out without giving away more than I wanted to.
Heh, I almost used the word 'sandwiched' in the fic, then I thought that maybe it didn't fit well with the rest of it.
I added in four words, but there's no way of making it more obvious without spoiling it. I'll just have to pretend that I was trying to be mysteriously, intensely clever while writing it, instead of just so caught up in Sirius-ness that I didn't realise quite how confusing the POV's were.
Argh, I'm scared of het sex. Writing it. Scared of writing it. Yes, the word penetrative couldn't be less sexy.
I just plain didn't think I could write this one at all! I'm even mildly squicked by it! Having said that, this is similar to that porny R/S I keep promising, only with an OC instead of Lily.
No way would I be able to write a full-length R/S angst thing!
No way would I be able to write a full-length R/S angst thing!
Of COURSE you would! Go on, sit down. Here's a keyboard and a drink...
Yeah, 'penetrative' is my serious medical-term word. But I do wonder why the women in fanfic always have get oral sex when maybe they'd prefer the penetrative, for want of a better word. Though you may be implying it in the first section, as I hope you are. This is one of my obsessions, so take no notice.
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Also? Whoa. How much do we all want to be Lily right now?
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Heh, yeah.
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I particularly liked: And, thankfully, finally, he was his again, or rather theirs, but still his too, just because the phrasing is just perfect and it sounds really rather innocent for some reason.
And you recced me! Wow! Thank you immensely. My first ever time being recced!
I would squee! if I was more of a girly-girl, but I'm not so it definitely calls for one triumphant and heartfelt ...
HUZZAH!
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Huzzah!
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You okay?
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Mmmhmm. Hungry. And sorry, I do think it's good, particularly the sandwich. *thoughts of Threesome*
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I added in four words, but there's no way of making it more obvious without spoiling it. I'll just have to pretend that I was trying to be mysteriously, intensely clever while writing it, instead of just so caught up in Sirius-ness that I didn't realise quite how confusing the POV's were.
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I got it though, as I said. Or I think I did. But I feel you objectify Lily too much, bearing in mind her symbolism/role in canon.
The allusions to the prank, the wistfulness on both sides are what make this interesting: it would be good to see that expanded in an R/S fic.
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I just plain didn't think I could write this one at all! I'm even mildly squicked by it! Having said that, this is similar to that porny R/S I keep promising, only with an OC instead of Lily.
No way would I be able to write a full-length R/S angst thing!
kxx
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Of COURSE you would! Go on, sit down. Here's a keyboard and a drink...
Yeah, 'penetrative' is my serious medical-term word. But I do wonder why the women in fanfic always have get oral sex when maybe they'd prefer the penetrative, for want of a better word. Though you may be implying it in the first section, as I hope you are. This is one of my obsessions, so take no notice.
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In that R/S I keep going on about there is lots of penetrative sex, I assure you. Oh dear...
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