Oh my god: it's chapter ten!

[kabeyk]

Yeah, sorry it took ages.

Just on my lj and remusxsirius for now, if you notice any canon-errors, plot-holes, typos or spelling mistakes, I would be very grateful if you’d point them out before I put this on Fiction Alley. Sorry for all my whining and much love to my betas liadlaith and minnow_53, without whom this would be a lot less coherent(but only the end section; don’t

Comments

[cristix]

Finally! I thought I was going to die waiting for the next chapter. Two months and a half you have made us waiting! How cruel! :)))

The chapter was great! So much sexual tension! I almost mad a scene here, in my office!

It was extremely hot! I liked it a lot, especially as you made very clear what Sirius feels for Remus without using soppy words like gorgeaus or something similar. Remus is just so, so, ....

Sirius doesn't finish his sentence, but we get the picture.

more comments later, now I really shoud finish my work and go home. It's oretty late here!

Lots of kisses and THANK YOU!

[kabeyk]

Aww, thank you, that's really sweet!

Yeah, I didn't want them to be soppy, so I'm very glad you think that.x

kxx

[kyasuriin]

*insides melty and goo* uhm, i think this is one of the only fics that makes me cry, not because its sad or really happy, but just because its so good. I am so glad to see part 10, you have no idea. *wiggles in chair* oh this is excellent... is this it then? *slightly pouty* if it is, thats okay, but.. i'll miss it. i'll have to reread it from time to time. *loves* thank you :)

[kabeyk]

There will be one more chapter actually, I'm not the sort of person who could just leave it there even if I wanted to.

Aww, thank you!

kx

[mllemoony]

So many funny throwaway moments in this part! Awesome!

‘I would have thought that it would be a trait only prevelant in those who have Muggle blood in them, but it seems to be the choice attacking method of all students. We truly are human beings before we are wizards, hmm?’

I loved this bit, and also the banter between James, Julian, and McG in her office.

It's really fun seeing Remus act like an immature jealous kid have him not realize it or know why. "He wasn't being very nice" was brilliant.

And now I'm all intrigued about how protesting saner part of Lupin's brain is going to interfere.

Thanks for updating, and don't feel bad at all about how long it took you! This part was very entertaining, as well as pretty damn long. Take as much time as you need for the next part!

(and sorry my comments aren't more constructively critical! :) )

[kabeyk]

We truly are human beings before we are wizards

That was something that always interested me, the way Harry learns to go for his wand when angry instead of just thumping Malfoy like he wants to in book 1.

Heh, stupid Remus. And thank you! Especially as I thought people would be complaining that this wasn't long enough; ch9 was 4,000 words longer than this!

kx

[spessartine]

Oh, so good! It really works. So much for your worries *is totally belittleing your artistic tribulations* *but in a nice way*

I love how terribly British they are about everything:
‘No, I’m so sorry, my fault, I shouldn’t- shouldn’t have-‘

And Sulky McSulkerson had me cackling madly. Strangely, I've actually been called that... I too love McGonagle in this. I don't know what it is, but you seem to have a way with her - I could absolutely hear her in my head. And, argh - more kissing!

Yup. *nods* Wonderful.

[kabeyk]

British is sexy, except for chavs and certain Northern accents.

I have been called that too; it's where I got it from!

And thanks muchly for being nice about McGonagall.x

kxx

[kabeyk]

My sis used to be one too. *shudder*

kx

[kabeyk]

Aww, thank you!

I like Sirius to be a bit vulnerable sometimes, makes him seem more human and less stunning sex-god.

I love the word 'wibbly'.

kxx

[kabeyk]

Heh, me too.

kx