Game Over chapter 1

[kaahiromi]

Genres: AU!, romance, smut, angst
Rating: Nc 17
Warnings: Rated scenes involving sex (lol)
Summary: "Once the game begins, the only choice is to stay on it until you reach the end, or lose. 
Will you endure the pain caused from it?" Cho Kyuhyun

Warning: This is a "sequel" of my other fanfic Go crazy, get hurt, be trapped so it would be better to read

Comments

[kaahiromi]

Spot for lovely Ita90 :)

[ita90]

Taking my spot *hug*
Kyu pov is very interesting. I can see (read) Kyu thoughts and see how Wookie was xD
Wookie is such a badass but Kyu is not better xD
They are worth each other ^^
Kyu is really evil here but I like it! I like it very much XD
Wait a minute at the end so Kyu don't love Wookie? Or on that moment just don't?

[kaahiromi]

haha indeed wookie was a badass, and yes Kyu isn't much better well so so lol
Really evil? XD He isn't that much... I think?
Well in this chapter he doesn't love wook, about the future this is uncertain ~

[ita90]

Well he isn't but somehow he is Just a little? (He will play with Wookie?) xD
Ooo I see.. Well good chapter :D I like Kyu pov :D

[neverfade0611]

Woah, I'm so happy you decided to write from Kyu's POV. I've been wondering for a while what went through that head of his. I would love to find out if all the love-sickness was for real, or a part of Kyu's game plan. He did appear to be completely head over heels tbh, maybe he falls in love along the way or it's just for show?

I feel bad for judging Ryeowook's character in GCGHBT, Kyu doesn't seem to be the innocent victim I'd previously thought him to be.Looks like I'll have to read ahead to find out ^^ I'm gonna be looking forward to an update =)

[kaahiromi]

you're fast! Like always, will save a spot for you next time, I didn't because I went to take a bath since it's so late here now LOL *2am*

That would be spoiler if I told you lol
Oh. I did it on purpose (sort of) at the same time I wanted him to look innocent, I hated Kyuhyun because he seemed too innocent while I planned him on my mind a little bit different. Really, Kyuhyun was almost like the ideal man in there lol (I admit it annoyed me a little bit, but it was Ryeowook's pov and I really couldn't do anything -.- that's also one of the reasons why I decided to do this)

Also because I thought it might be interesting to know about the past since gcghbt (that's so long to write LOL) started from a point when they already know each other for quite a while.

The next update is from gcghbt :) (wow I wrote a text o.o")

[the_najwa]

Oh, you made another one just for Kyuhyun's POV ?
How witty of you. Now I hate my old thought about Ryeowook being in diva mode in another fic of yours.
Ah, it's getting complicated.
Andddd, whatever it'll be, I really hope that you'll end both of your stories in a good way. You know what I mean, right ? I just want my babies to be together.
p/s: did I tell you before that your writing skill is totally impressive ?
I love your writing. Your English is flawless.
P/s/s: You'll update the GCGHBT too after this right ? Or, you've ended it up ?

[kaahiromi]

Yes I did another one just for Kyuhyun. Actually, I had planned this for a long time! I couldn't put his part together with Ryeowook's since it was just idk, even the name of the other fic is based on Ryeowook's opinion, it wouldn't match.

Haha I know, believe me, I want them together as well, but sadly they are so complicated -.-

Oh dear thank you <3
haha I believe there's many flaws, but you make me happy :D

Of course I'll update it! There's so many things to happen :3
In fact, this will be my next update I'm working on it ^^

Oh. And this is a "sequel" in a certain mode. There will be a point when I'll end Ryeowook's pov and will keep the history from Kyuhyun's pov. SO yeah, the end will depend of Kyuhyun's pov then ^^

[the_najwa]

Your mind is totally full of, errr, IDK what's the term...but whatever it is, your mind is full of it. *Idk what I'm saying.

Just one thing to ask : How did you get the ideasssss ? You are just a plot-twister. End of story :D

[kaahiromi]

Full of what? lol plots? xD plans?

I don't know how I get them, I sometimes have nothing better to do and keep thinking about how I can make the history can proceed. Many times I keep blocked :( some of them I plot way before so I can still go lol (there are many ideas still hanging in my mind, many were discarted though :/)

[pichaa07]

wow this is gettin more and more interesting,
can't wait for your next update >.<
it keeps me wondering what really happen between kyu and wookie... especially what happen in kyu's mind all this time.
is it really just a game for kyu until your last chapter of "Go crazy, get hurt, be trapped" or it is not.. i hope it's not, considering the title of this ^ ^

i used to feel bad for kyu, but after this.. hmm was he really a victim of wook... or... ahh so excited!

love you for writing kyu's pov ^ ^ and i love your diary style in this chapter... <3

[kaahiromi]

Haha no one knows what happen in Kyu's mind this entire time, me neither (probably)the title will have an explanation soon :)
everyone used to feel bad for Kyu (really, why? lol)

Thank you dear <3

[pichaa07]

because i used to thought that he's the victim XDD
it was heartbreaking to see how patient he was with wookie, wait for his feeling to be returned for that long T.T coping with wookie's roller coaster mood and feelings for him...

but after reading this...
hmm, actually i can never tell for sure how kyu's feeling bout that... no one really know what happen in kyu's mind and his real intention to wookie...
it was all made up from wookie's point of view... XDDD
ahhhh you're making this more complicated!

can't wait for next chapters >.

[kaahiromi]

haha I feel bad because I will ruin that image of him being patient a little bit more lol

don't even tell me, I'm late for updating exactly because things are getting out of my control and aish they are so complicated >.>

thanks for commenting :)

[leunah23]

so this is like a backstory...side story same story...all rolled into one? nice :)
i like it
i think its genius
keep on writing :)

[kaahiromi]

whoa even I got confused in there lol
haha thank you <3
I'll keep on writing :)