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Nov 28, 2013 02:25

Title: Of Useless Insecurities and Jealousy.

Pairing: Jongkey

Rating: R

Words: 1500+

Summary: Key watched her hit on Jonghyun. Revenge ensued thereafter (aka I suck at summaries).

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just2wings November 28 2013, 23:44:46 UTC
leaving the first spot for Roo ^^

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cuethemusicc November 29 2013, 07:39:22 UTC
how very gracious of you to leave me this spot ♥

and omg why would you apologize after writing such an amazing piece, silly nathalia ;-; this is so much more than i expected and asked for. like just the emotional aspect that you added made it all the better.

you've always had a very good grasp of their personalities, and that really came through in your writing. like just2wings said key has many personality traits that might not traditionally go together so people usually focus on one aspect. he always seems kind of possessive towards what is his and bold, but also vulnerable. somehow you managed to get that all across, no problem.

also don't get me started on the grinding @_@ i know that's what we were talking about/i asked for, but it was that much hotter and more meaningful with the emotions you added in.

just.. thank you so much ;-; and you've been holding out on us all along, huh?

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k_pop4life November 29 2013, 22:22:26 UTC
I like writing out their emotions, especially because I'm not that great at describing the whole smut thing.

I am really excited you think so omg thanks!!!
you need to stop giving me these ideas. no good smh at you!

Lmao I didn't have the confidence to post before but I think I will start writing longer stories where I can develop the stories a little more. I don't want to promise anything though.

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just2wings November 29 2013, 00:00:04 UTC
next to Jonghyun where he belonged awee i like how you used that imagery/expression to prove your point. very fitting
oh shortie Jonghyun xD <3333
I realized what she was doing from the moment she approached me. I just don’t understand why you needed to act so childish in front of everyone else I have to admit I think they both have a point :/
“It’s been two years and counting… Don’t hide from me,” Jonghyun smiled softly at Key. I don't know why but I found this so so cute
When you whispered you loved me, two and a half years ago in the middle of the night omggggg this is so romantic I just ;______; makes it seem like Key was all vulnerable when he said it, too. asdfsda;lj my heart
He was a proud man aaaaand what I love most about this is how you reconciled both the bold and vulnerable sides of Key in this drabble/oneshot. I feel likes it's something that's often lacking or not done well enough because it rings true and it can be hard to do. so yeah, thanks for that ^^
pulling at the blond strands unf hair pulling *ahem*
Jonghyun’s ( ... )

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k_pop4life November 29 2013, 03:28:17 UTC
let's try replying for the third time... ugh
I am very glad you liked it and that you enjoyed all those moments. I was really hoping to convey the way key is so proud and yet, so vulnerable sometimes, but especially in relation to jonghyun. I want to strive to depict them as true to their personalities as possible which is why I am really happy you picked up on that. /hugs

All i could imagine was jonghyun close to his release only for Key to step away, tease him and leave the room. this thought gives me life tbh.

can you really call that smut though? thank you for reading and commenting ♥ Also, adorable!jjong was an accident at the end I guess.

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jongkey1999 November 29 2013, 04:57:41 UTC
hi imma new reader...
I love how you played out Kibum's insecurities about himself..
ALTHOUGH his insecurities is why i love him, he's just so human at times and keeps it real, unlike some other idols who are glowing fairies of righteousness and all things good.
i do understand how it's like to have someone that's not really heavily-biased by other people as your one and only true bias, lol.

it's really entertaining to watch him transitioning from being all bitc* i'm fabulous to being all embarrassed and back.
and of course the Dino is always there to reassure our lovely baby:)

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k_pop4life November 29 2013, 06:07:51 UTC
Hello there, and what I wanted was to explore some of the characteristics that I've observed about Key during the past few years. More so, when he's around Jonghyun.

Key is so much more than some people make him out to be (which is really upsetting) and it's because many people in or outside the fandom conceptualize these outdated flat versions of the members in general but more specifically with Key being the "diva". I totally understand you honey

I absolutely adore the dynamics between the two of them ♥
Thank you so much for reading and commenting. /hugs

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yuli104 November 30 2013, 06:59:53 UTC
I loved it! Well honestly I love every story that has jealous and possessive jongkey^^

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k_pop4life December 1 2013, 23:05:22 UTC
Haha it's good you like it! Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

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shineeshipper08 December 1 2013, 18:15:27 UTC
Aweh I always have a thing for jealous Key c:, always so cute. This was adorable and extremely hot at the end XD, loved it :D. Was also a nice break to all the recent angst stories ._.
Aghdldlaja this is so cute tho >_<
I can't get over it agh,
Also happy December~!

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k_pop4life December 2 2013, 01:32:37 UTC
Cute, adorable and extremely hot? Oh gosh I am glad I could make you feel that through this story.

Happy december to you too honey! This is my favorite month (minus the finals).

Thank you for reading and commenting ♥

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shineeshipper08 December 2 2013, 06:00:16 UTC
Oh finals D:, good luck on those!
tbh I just can't wait for winter break XD aghhhh
hehe you're welcome c:

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