Author:
k_laker Chapter: Two
Band/Pairing: ToraxHiroto; HirotoxTora [alicenine.]
Theme: 27. solemnity (
30emotions )
Rating: PG [possibly throughout; no promises; could rise to R; possibly]
Warnings: none.
Disclaimer: I only own the plot and the words.
Beta:
malveillance Word Count: 2671
Summary: It's just how things were.
Notes: x-posted like a mother. Sorry f-list. <3
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The way you write it, the characters, the little cute things you add in here and there. It flows so well.
I can't wait for more!
And I'm glad to hear it'll be a long one!!!
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I even 'yay'd out loud. xD; <33
I was really worried with the flow but I'm glad it's working for you. And the cute stuff just..pops in randomly. :D
Again thank you! I'm going to make it a mission to make it long.
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The flow and how everything is worded is probably my favorite thing. I got so excited when I saw you had posted another chapter.
>:3 good long fics are good.
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-flails wildly-
:D
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I'm so happy right now. You don't even knowww. <3333323821852152317
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You won't have to wait long, I'm sure. :]
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i'm totally loving this fic, especially the way you write it ^o^
and i also like the tora/pon pairing
i'm waiting for chapter 3 <3
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You won't have to wait long. <3
ToraxPon is one of my top OTPs. x]
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Thanks a lot, it's well written ! =D
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Lonely indeed. T.T
I liked how you put all these little background details of the city and the shops :) I could picture it all and somehow it was really nostalgic and I couldn't help but see everything in a sepia light XD~
I really really like this story just FYI LOL I like little Akira and Hiroto and Tora and Everything♥
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