Going Home 5/7 (Alice/Bella)

Jul 27, 2009 15:17


Title: Going Home.
Author:  Read more... )

alice/bella, twilight fic, "going home"

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yellowsmurf6 July 27 2009, 05:56:24 UTC
*gasps* Oh noes!!

*begs* Please, oh please, oh please don't make us wait too long for the next part!

This is a very intriguing take and twist on the relationship. The emotions run strong and deep, and one can only hope that the underlying bond between them will be strong enough to withstand the strain of the sudden life altering event. Looking very forward to seeing where you take this and how you will wrap it up in just two more parts.

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k_icker July 27 2009, 09:31:25 UTC
Wow *blush* very humbled by your comment - thank you so much. Normally I don't show my writing to people other than a very good friend of mine - who is biased - so its really nice to see that people really do enjoy reading my stories.

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aeleorn July 27 2009, 16:27:00 UTC
Well, I'm glad you decided to show us your writing anyway!
You write very well actually...

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hyperandblonde July 27 2009, 18:40:13 UTC
Oh my God. I love the way you've written this story. Its beautiful. No one has ever come up with the idea to turn Bella before she knew what Alice was. It was always Alice dealing with Bella as a human. And I adored that. I never thought I'd like it this way...But I may like it better. I think its freakin amazing! You've done such a wonderful job!!! Oh please don't let us wait to long!!!! I'm dying to just read more!

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