And the Devil Makes Mistakes

[k_hiino]

Err...my first fanfiction post in English? 8D; I'm not that good so...comments please? *puppy eyes*

Title: And the Devil Makes Mistakes

By: Me and kuroferu

Disclaimer: If we own Kuroshitsuji and KHR, we won’t need to write this fanfiction, seriously.

Rating: T/PG-13

Warning: OOC, shonen-ai, hints of M scenes, CRACK, UNBETA-ED

Pairing: SebastCiel, 6927, Sebast27

Comments

[diwan_sama]

I loved your story but I'm glad I could read it on FF.net instead of your journal because this font, size and color make the whole text really painfull for the eyes.

I think this will discourage a lot of people from reading and it's a pity because your story is interesting and promising.

[k_hiino]

hu...hua OwO I'm sorry! I couldn't find another layout so...I used this without thinking *shot down*

Thanks for the suggestion! *bows*

[amaterashu]

You're mixing two of my favourite OTPs, I think I'm in love with you. <3 Good start, now all I need to do is patiently wait for chapter 2 (which is hopefully coming out soon)

Oh, and I partially agree with diwan_sama, the yellow colour is horrid. I don't mind the size or the font but the yellow text puts me off.

[k_hiino]

Chapter 2... I'm still trying to write it... *somehow stuck in...yeha*

I didn't understand how to change the colour but...somehow I managed to change them all into white :3 how is it now?

[amaterashu]

The text looks much better in white and my eyes aren't bleeding anymore. ^_^

Take your time with chapter 2, I'm just being impatient and whiny, so just ignore me.

[bt_tara]

It's horrible to read this in a small font when the background color is black and the text is gray plus I was reading this in the morning when the light was practically shinning through my window. Nonetheless, reading this was quite enjoyable. I will be anticipating the next chapter.

[k_hiino]

I tried to change the size in CSS but...it's not working OwO;; I will try to find another layout though, but I already changed te colour into white :3

The next chapter will come...hopefully soon x3

[theamazingfetus]

I laughed so hard. Excellent crack fic.

[k_hiino]

thank you x3

[manganra]

Yeah, your English is not the best (sorry), but the idea is so good, I can't help wanting to read more. ^_^