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[k_e_wilson]

Title: When we were young (Chapter 4)
Author: K_E_Wilson
Rating: PG (see warnings)
Word Count: ~2000 (Still pretty constant)
Disclaimer: Alas, I can't even claim to own the idea for this one- Characters from the great mind of Mr. Roddenberry, copyright to the big-shots, and idea off a prompt.
Warnings: None for this chapter. Just a bar fight or six

Comments

[lisamariedavis]

You're doing a great job with this.

[k_e_wilson]

Again, thank you for your continued support.

[blcwriter]

So fractured and so fascinating. I'll look forward to Bones finding out and how you play that-- calm reveal or something dramatic.

[k_e_wilson]

I tried not to build too much between them here just yet, and you'll see why in the next chapter.

[clay_marble]

Fantastic story.

[k_e_wilson]

Thank you. :)

[masterpenguin82]

Great story - Looking forward to more.

[k_e_wilson]

I'm glad you're enjoying my little work.

[shadowakiyah]

This is very well written, and very intriguing. I like the way that you've moulded it to canon, and I'm really interested to see where you take it from here. I vaguely remember seeing a prompt somewhere about Jim having multiple personalities, and if that's the one you're working off, you're doing one hell of a great job.

As Spock would say, it's fascinating.

Looking forward to more.

[k_e_wilson]

I'm so happy you're enjoying it. Indeed, I tried very hard to mold it to cannon so as to make it as non-AU as possible, but rather a variant of the current 'verse.
The prompt was indeed one posted at the Community, HERE but I've deviated slightly form the O.P.'s demands.
I'm glad, though, that you think I'm doing "one hell of a great job" It boosts my confidence that I won't be shot for putting Jim through all this shit.

[shadowakiyah]

I remember thinking at the time that it would make one hell of a story, and that it made sense to Jim's character for him to have multiple personalities. I do honestly love the direction you've taken with it, and I think it's how you've introduced each separate personality, and integrated them into the 'Jim' that we know and love, that has me absolutely loving this. I know this is a Kirk/McCoy fic, and I'm loving that aspect, but that aside, just as character insight into Jim it really works, imo.

And no, I don't think you'll be shot for putting Jim through all that shit, after all, if he didn't go through it all, then a)he wouldn't be the Jim that we all love b)you wouldn't have written this which would be a travesty and c) we wouldn't get to see him fixed/semi-fixed or atleast understood to an extent, or accepted for who he is, by our ever-lovin' Bones!

:)

[k_e_wilson]

stop that mushy love-my-writing stuff; you'll spoil me and make me cry with happy.
/wibble
that's the nicest thing anyone's ever said 'bout my writing.
/cough
NOW GO TO THE NEXT CHAPTER... I'll-- be over here... NOT crying in joy.