A is for Adoration [Oneshot]

Jul 25, 2009 01:22

[A is for Adoration] ............This is my first smut.....O___O *blushes until blood gushes out of my ears and runs*

Where is my fricking soccer ball?

“Yah! Changmin, watch where you’re going!”

Junsu rubbed his freshly tripped-over ankle irritably as Changmin stumbled onto Yoochun’s piano with a loud, harmonious BLANG!

He was quite cranky. ( Read more... )

pairing: yoosu, pairing: ot5, genre: smut, length: oneshot, genre: comedy, rating: nc-17

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k_chan91 July 25 2009, 13:25:25 UTC
Darn! I forgot to save a spot for misstellittome Umm...spot saved for her...??? o.o

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misstellittome July 25 2009, 19:23:12 UTC
awww... thanks! i already commented... XD

i've never had a spot before O_O i feel spesheeal.

i bow down to your dbsk fic-ing power XD

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k_chan91 July 25 2009, 21:27:28 UTC
I sorry! >.< I didn't get to save you a better spot. This is like getting you a seat in the nose bleed section at a baseball game. xDD

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ssam_ssam July 25 2009, 14:33:04 UTC
Spot! I'm at worrrrk shhhhhhhh xDD

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k_chan91 July 25 2009, 14:46:09 UTC
Gaah! This fic isn't work safe! Dx

...And neither is your icon. O____O

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ssam_ssam July 25 2009, 15:47:11 UTC
Ohohoohohohho
Which is why I was in a corner huddling over my iPod xDD

Are you sure this was your first smut? Coz this waaas funny and goood
I laughed so loudly that my co worker was looking at me weird xDD hahaha

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k_chan91 July 25 2009, 16:06:20 UTC
LOOOOL! xDDDD

You don't look weird or suspicious to your boss at all...Nope, nope. Certainly not. @_@

Um, um, um...I did a lot of research before I wrote it. O_____O I think the dong bang boys just came off as overly horny....which is what they're supposed to be. 8D

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misstellittome July 25 2009, 19:21:30 UTC
wow... i ... i... just wow.

O_O

-five minutes later-

ok... i had to snap out of my post-reading daze to really comment. this was soooo incredibly good. it's not what i expected...it was much much better! *_*
for your first smut, this was...mind blowing.

wow...changmin's flexibility hahaha ...was amazing! really...
and i loved it how yoochun pushed yunho outta the way. "this is mine" aww...some cute and yet smutty yoosu love right there. :D i have to say that the four synced orgasms were too good hahaa...
and jaejoong near the end! XD so funny...

for some reason yoochun's entering statement made me laugh so much "is manager hyung trying to play the piano again?" hee hee

ok, sorry for the long comment.
this was great! i'm mem-ing it...!!! XD

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k_chan91 July 25 2009, 21:32:30 UTC
Gaaah! >///< *blushes and runs away*

Darn muses switched from Skittles to M&M's....That may explain the flexible!Min...O_O

I....seriously need to take a long break from smut after that. xD I'll be in a hole now if you need to find me. ._.

>////////////////

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purpleinpink July 26 2009, 08:57:36 UTC
omoooooooooooooooooooooo that was hot. like seriously hottt. and it's your first smut? i dont believe that XD

someone should really record the whole deal and i'll die a happy pervy fangirl XD

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pkan July 28 2009, 04:51:07 UTC
uhm.. just realized those members that much adore Junsu 5+

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