Gift fic for elfiepike

Jul 19, 2012 00:53

Title: Compensation
Pairing/Characters: 8Uppers, gen
Rating: PG-13 for language and violence.
Warnings: Just a bit of violence. The standard 8Uppers amount.
Notes: For elfiepike. I took your 8Uppers prompt and ran with it. I hope you'll be happy with the result. :)
Summary: Gum tries to take everything into his own hands.

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p: none, 8uppers

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elfiepike July 18 2012, 18:51:11 UTC
oh my gosh 8UPPERS FIC!! GUM!! yesssssss. oh my gosh i love the way you build the tension through time-skips and lines like this:

“This is crazy,” Johnny says. Ace hits a wall in frustration, but the problem is that everyone knows why Gum left on his own even though no one wants to talk about it.

the way you slowly introduce how gum is trying to make up for a mistake versus the other guys realizing what gum is doing/why he's missing...but of course 8uppers win and lose as a team, together. oh my heart. ;~;

And Ace punches his good arm and says “Fuck you” and that’s when Gum knows everything is going to be okay.

;~~~; 8UPPERS FEELS.

AND THEN HE STILL SUCCEEEEEDS. oh my gosh, gum. gum and everyone!!!

this really, really hits my ♥TEAM♥ feels, which is just perfect because that's the reason i love 8uppers so much: because they are a team. i love how you have everyone's personalities down in this, too, the way they each deal with gum's disappearance differently ( ... )

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lilly0 July 18 2012, 20:38:47 UTC
I'm loving all of this!! O_O
Arsenal <3
ACE!!!!!!!!!!! Ace was so freaking awesome!
Mac <3
And Gum of course <3 <3 <3 <3
All of them!
Thanks so much for writing this! It's AWESOME!!!!!!!

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yuumei_nata July 18 2012, 20:58:21 UTC
This is so different from all the other 8U fic I've read but I really liked it :D And the focus on Gum was great, too~

Thank you~!

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spurious July 18 2012, 23:18:54 UTC
oh my goodness, this is a wonderful fic!!! it's just the kind of thing i want from 8uppers genfic; the team dynamic, everyone's personalities encapsulated so well in the way they each deal with the situation, and.

“One of us wins, we all win,” Ace says. “One of us loses we all fucking lose, okay?”

FEELINGS ♥____________♥

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astrangerenters July 21 2012, 21:48:19 UTC
Yes!! Lots of Gum feels - the guilt and wanting to make it up to everyone by...doing something colossally stupid, and yet pulling it off...so good. And the team dynamics were great :)

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